Confessions of Love (INCOMPLETE)

[Guest DK.]

had to do it..

wassup soompi? nothing much here.. on break.. back at home.. found lotta free time to write and record.. this is just a rough draft of something im working on.. heard the beat and i had to make this track.. experimented with my rhyme schemes and flow.. Hi-Fi Lo-Fi more to come including a completed version of this song.. and btw i been meaning to reply to some of the threads in singing.. i will once i get back home tonight.. as always, any c/c's would be appreciated.. be harsh.. i like to learn that way.. beat credz to www.soundclick.com/jenius happy holidays!

[Guest wenwen]

i think u sound a bit trying to hard... i dunno rapping should sound really fluent and easy goin

[Guest babiixru]

i agree with wenwen, so maybe rap at a lower pitch? but otherwise than that, it seems fine. except somewhere in the middle, maybe add more words and etc in there (:

i want to hear a full song T_T

[Guest peeaye]

devin<333333

complete version dude!!

[Guest 1701]

Dude where's the fulll?!

Keep it up man, sounding good.

[Guest pinkpiglet]

yes i want the full version!!!

it sounds great devin! keep going~

[Guest DK.]

i think u sound a bit trying to hard... i dunno rapping should sound really fluent and easy goin

yup i noticed that too after a listen.. it was a quick and roughly done version anyways.. i hope the completed version sounds better.

thanks everyone for the support and encouragement.

[ritzy!]

i think u sound a bit trying to hard... i dunno rapping should sound really fluent and easy goin

Yeah, agreed.

Sounds liek you're in a battle and hesitatin..

[Guest lovablekrnstar63]

sounds nice

when i was trying to sing along (or is it rap along?)

with jang woo hyuk's flip reverse

i realized i cant rap for crap

(haha that was a rhyme! =] )

so whenever i hear people rap i think its amazing

it was really SHORT it disappoitned me b/c i wanted to hear more

but i guess it'll coem in time =]

great job!