Guest yddelight Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 @packmule @cdbarzun....keep on writing. you should seriously continue with this one-shot thing! well, I am officially starting a petition for you to continue this writing. Michosos...I am going to launch a petition for @cdbarzun @packmule to turn this to a fanfic story...This has potential..so much tension for a first episode... Thanks for this story!!! More!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikoshine Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 super love love love that short story you made @packmule3 ... :xgreat job =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akasia Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 my heart was pounding like crazy reading @packmule3 VERY short storywe want more!! more! > Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest blackowl Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 @packmule3 Many thanks! Had really a good time reading your story =D> =D> =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Midge Razak Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 @Jazcabbb, With my assistant’s help, I made this story for you [see below] as an apology for having subjected you to the more lewd aspect of our grown-up imaginations in the forum yesterday. I would have offered to treat you out to lunch but since we’re only virtual friends, this will have to suffice. I believe young girls like you should be given the chance to preserve their idealistic view of love as long as possible, so I’m sorry. I had my PA help me with this – she’s a voracious reader of anything romantic – and she rated it PG 13, meaning there are no inappropriate words. She said it was cheesy, though. [Oh well. I still have MY day job. Hers? It’s touch-and-go right now. Muahahahaha.] Also, it would be remiss of me as an adult, if I don’t encourage you [and the other teenage lurkers here] to read Shakespeare. As much as I love GWGM and k-dramas, I highly recommend that you spend more time with the Original Dramaturgist at this stage of your life. Studying his plays will add depth to your understanding of human nature and motivation and, of course, enhance your viewing pleasure of the latest popular K-drama. If you ask me, King Lear is appropriate for this occasion. While its plot may appear convoluted with political intrigues, back-stabbing, and misalliances, it is essentially nothing more than a Cinderella story with a tragic ending. [Heads up! Everybody dies.] In a nutshell, two daughters were wresting control of Britain from their father, the king. The king, so distraught by this filial betrayal, became insane but was saved by the third and youngest daughter, Cordelia, whom he had earlier rejected. And WHY did he reject Cordelia? Because she had the temerity to stay true to herself and not FAKE her love for her father to curry favors. You see, the king demanded that his three daughters tell him how much they loved him and he would divide his kingdom among themselves according to their “profession of love.” Refusing to play this game, Cordelia opted for the simple truth. Her sparse words however sounded like an insult so the king banished her, thus setting his downfall into motion. This is the famous quote from Cordelia: I cannot heave my heart into my mouth. [meaning: I won’t flatter you with declaration of love to gain your wealth.] I love you majesty according to my bonds, no more nor less. [meaning: I love you as a daughter would. Simply. Honestly.] For me, if you strip the drama King Lear to its core, it’s just a cautionary tale of choosing style over substance. It tell us that, in matters of love, we shouldn’t fall for the style, i.e., the flashy stuff, the outward appearances, the girl’s beauty, the superficial things, and instead, we should focus on the deeper character, the steadfast quality, and the SUBSTANCE of your love. I hope you’ll remember this when watching K-pops or venturing out into your own romance. Now on to my token story. Remember my caveats: I’m not the Bard, not even by a nail clipping, and this story is mawkish enough for all of us, Taecgui fans, so it’s not to be taken seriously. It’s also deliberately short to allow YOU to fill in the blanks. Think of it as a Make-Your-Own-Adventure kind of homework. Again, with my apologies, -cdbarzun ********** I’m sorry. “Talk to me, Guigui,” he said desperately. “You’ve got to tell me how you’re feeling.” To his ears, his plea sounded strangely like an echo of her past demands for him to open up to her. How many times had she cajoled him good-naturedly to eat breakfast with her and talk about his day or to stay up a little bit longer and chat with her after the shooting? She had always been eager for his company. But now to his eyes, this was no longer the same joyful, ever-loving girl but a pale ghostly reflection. Her expressionless face, her rigid shoulders, and unyielding arms told him all that he needed to know. She hasn’t forgiven him. “Please, Guigui.” He wanted to howl the words but they came out softly, like a prayer. She forced a smile. “What else is there to say, Taec? I’m fine. I’ve moved on like you said I should. Annyeong.” She marched briskly toward the elevator. He quickly followed and reached for her hand. “Hey, wait.” “No, let go.” She tried to shake her hand free but he held on and pulled her to a corner hidden from prying eyes by a potted plant. “I didn’t mean it to sound that way, Gui. I just didn’t know how to…” “He felt her stiffened before she forcibly wrested her hand from him, nearly throwing him off-balanced. Smiling with gritted teeth, she said, “You didn’t know how to what? To pick up a phone and say hello? To text two letters: H and I? To click the darn ‘like’ button on Facebook? To friend me on Weibo?” She paused in her tirade and squeezed her eyes shut, afraid to show how much his silence had hurt her then. But he knew her, and his arms strained to embrace her pain. “I’m terribly sorry,” he began to confess haltingly. “Just because I acted like I didn’t care doesn’t mean that I didn’t know what an absolute jerk I was to you. Guerigo...I just didn’t know how to keep you at my side. Guerigo… to tell you the truth, I didn’t understand myself well then either. I’m sorry. I know I hurt you.” She drew a big breath then exhaled slowly. She opened her eyes and regarded him for a long minute. “It’s all in the past now. I have to go now,” she said with finality. “We’re shooting a film right now in this building. I have people waiting for me. I have a director waiting for me.” She darted past him to go to the elevator. He couldn’t believe she was walking away from him. “Yaah! Guigui!” he shouted at her departing back, “You also have a husband waiting for you.” “Like you, you mean?” She fired back, without even looking back at him or breaking her stride. “We got married for a show, if you remember.” She reached the elevator and began to frantically push the elevator’s down button. He reappeared by her side again and leaned against the wall, arms crossed over his chest. She looked everywhere else but at his arms and chest. “It was real to me, Guigui, as real as if we were making our vows in church. I meant them sincerely. Although I knew we were going to separate after the show ended because of work, I meant those vows to become husband and wife. I never even looked at anyone else as a wife.” She stopped jabbing at the button and looked up at him suspiciously. “Are you still mad after all this time that I denied you at Yes/No game? What are you up to? Why are you acting like this?” Gently, he raised his hand to cup her cheek, “Because I love you. It took me a while to realize that, but I do know it now. Believe me when I say I missed you and I love you. If I could turn back time, I would have treated you better.” She stood transfixed as he bent down to brush her forehead with a kiss. Then, tears welled up in her eyes and her lips began to tremble. He almost didn’t hear her quiet, choked words, “No, Taec, don’t. I don’t think I can’t let myself believe in you again. I don’t know if I can fall in love with you again.” The elevator doors slid open. She nudged him to escape and get on the elevator but he firmly grasped her elbow to hold her still. With his other hand, he signaled the people in the elevator to go ahead. The doors closed again. Slowly, as if approaching a wild, easily frightened animal, he wrapped her in his arms. She resisted for a moment but he calmed her down with his low murmurs and kisses on her hair. Then, he tucked her head under his chin and said, “It’s okay, Guigui. Gwenchana. Until you learn to love me again, I’ll love you enough for both of us.” Moaawrrrrrr! Chulbal! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest fin4cae Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 @ packmule3 it's a very great short story =D> more story please,, [-O< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lmangla Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 any news from the Baidu FBI? did they figure out the bracelet mystery? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thao Huynh Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 @packmule3I always have this scene in my head that one Taec will regret so much for not grabbing on the chance he has with Gui Gui. You just hit me right there in the spot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluemoonrising Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 @packmule3Please forgive me if I say the Shakespeare part made me fall asleep but I love your short story on Taecgui especially this part:She forced a smile. “What else is there to say, Taec? I’m fine. I’ve moved on like you said I should. Annyeong.” She marched briskly toward the elevator.He quickly followed and reached for her hand. “Hey, wait.”“No, let go.” She tried to shake her hand free but he held on and pulled her to a corner hidden from prying eyes by a potted plant.“I didn’t mean it to sound that way, Gui. I just didn’t know how to…”“He felt her stiffened before she forcibly wrested her hand from him, nearly throwing him off-balanced. Smiling with gritted teeth, she said, “You didn’t know how to what? To pick up a phone and say hello? To text two letters: H and I? To click the darn ‘like’ button on Facebook? To friend me on Weibo?”She paused in her tirade and squeezed her eyes shut, afraid to show how much his silence had hurt her then. But he knew her, and his arms strained to embrace her pain.I was so engrossed in your story I felt like giving woody Taec a kick in the butt for always being so unresponsive and no initiative. ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cchris5 Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 Whew, thank you all for putting us back on track....happy, positive and a little crazy here. Regarding the two presscon pics, they are similar yet different. Similar fashion style and pose but a different feel. Definitely taecgui couple looks more natural. Some of you treat TY as your yeobos and some of us feel like (monster) mother-in-laws because GG is "someone we need to protect" haha!Honestly, I wish that taecgui fans would stop badgering TY and GG about each other. Leave them alone to find out for themselves their true feelings and how to proceed. They are the ones who know best! I know that we all care for them and would really love them to be together but only time can tell. Besides, we don't want to be sasaeng fans who hurt them rather then help them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest lauramcfarlane Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 akasia said: GuiTaecFany said: which the best? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
129alphabet Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 @packmule3 my eyes welled with tears. Because just like @Thao Huynh said, this has been my hope for this pair - that in REALITY, somehow, someday, Taec would realize how much he'd lost when he let her go. People would think that I had been attached and had been affected SO MUCH by a mere show when it was clearly defined as a virtual marriage - fake, unreal, terminal... I have been arguing with myself a lot.. A part of me is convinced that a real relationship between the two, is hardly possible given the circumstances they're in. But still there's a part of me - and it's not the shipper nor fan side of me but the person who has been touched/moved by this couple's story - that believes that, just like how they overcame all barriers to make their virtual marriage a success, they can do so too for real. And now, I'm a bit more crazier being affected too much by your story... *sighs* I think I live in the fantasy world way too much and way too long~~ This is the most crazy and delusional thought of me.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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akasia Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 can someone translate what gg posted on her fb?sighh i should have learnt mandarin as my 3rd language Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiirlaaay Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 OMG I just want to thank the Baidu Taecgui shippers!! I'm loving all the ps photos that they're doing!!Honestly reading all those hot posts of Taecgui and now finding these pictures!! Really makes my week of no more WGM. cr. Baidu.com <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
129alphabet Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 cchris5 said: Whew, thank you all for putting us back on track....happy, positive and a little crazy here. Regarding the two presscon pics, they are similar yet different. Similar fashion style and pose but a different feel. Definitely taecgui couple looks more natural. Some of you treat TY as your yeobos and some of us feel like (monster) mother-in-laws because GG is "someone we need to protect" haha! Honestly, I wish that taecgui fans would stop badgering TY and GG about each other. Leave them alone to find out for themselves their true feelings and how to proceed. They are the ones who know best! I know that we all care for them and would really love them to be together but only time can tell. Besides, we don't want to be sasaeng fans who hurt them rather then help them. lol which is the main reason we gather here....we are not here to badger lol but to whine about it to each other ROFL........ i mean how else we are going to release our frustration of our delusions modes so we can still stay rational lols....we are a family here in a sense or should i say virtual sense....where all of us had our own certain part of rationality left and delusions mode on at the same times lols... =)) crazy? yea sounds crazy to my own ears too..... =)) but we are born out of 'Crazy Couple' after all i believe it here that even we whine about not seeing taec in another movie / drama as it will break our heart at seeing him being lovey dovey with another female leads....we will still watch it....we will drag our feet about it....lols but honestly....we still do it.... most people will be more protective of guigui including me....but i stand on a firmer feet that she is not as fragile as most people want to believe her to be to me guigui are made of sterner stuff and smarter that most people gave her credits for so im convincing myself....that i will support two of them in their own path of choice of all their individual activities however when and should or should i say 'IF' or 'IF' they are in a relationship so that they can announce their relationship....all here will be one of the first to rejoice to the world!!!! lols....cause we are all just waiting for that....and at the mean times we shall have our own delusions mode in this forum lols =)) to maintain our sanity i shall say lols =)) I agree! This is what this forum is for! in here we can release all our hopes, dreams and most especially delusions of taec and gui! We put all our delusions here because we don't want to badger them of anything.. I'd really dislike it too if people (be it taecgui fan or not) would directly message either T or G "to be real" or things like that.. Oh well, i'd continue to shout and tell Taec and Gui to HAVE A REAL RELATIONSHIP ALREADY!!! but of course it shall be in this forum and this forum only!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cchris5 Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 Peace! Chill! angelangie, I am on your side! I mean fans who wait outside JYP and asks him if he misses GG or fans who link everything and anything they do and say, to each other. Give them space otherwise how can they have a secret relationship? Does this mean some of us here? My sincere apologies. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tangmo92 Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 Second week without Taecgui... T___T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ShermaineL Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 @packmule3 Quote: It tell us that, in matters of love, we shouldn’t fall for the style, i.e., the flashy stuff, the outward appearances, the girl’s beauty, the superficial things, and instead, we should focus on the deeper character, the steadfast quality, and the SUBSTANCE of your love. Unquote Keep up the good work!.. you really know the feeling of TaceGui's character well and this is good substance story to be read by all ages. U have also give some tips to any shipper who are interested in writing this fanfic story.Hope next time you produce your Shakespeare in love fanfic in this forum.. :-h GOD BLESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
129alphabet Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 129alphabet said: @packmule3 my eyes welled with tears. Because just like @Thao Huynh said, this has been my hope for this pair - that in REALITY, somehow, someday, Taec would realize how much he'd lost when he let her go. People would think that I had been attached and had been affected SO MUCH by a mere show when it was clearly defined as a virtual marriage - fake, unreal, terminal... I have been arguing with myself a lot.. A part of me is convinced that a real relationship between the two, is hardly possible given the circumstances they're in. But still there's a part of me - and it's not the shipper nor fan side of me but the person who has been touched/moved by this couple's story - that believes that, just like how they overcame all barriers to make their virtual marriage a success, they can do so too for real. And now, I'm a bit more crazier being affected too much by your story... *sighs* I think I live in the fantasy world way too much and way too long~~ This is the most crazy and delusional thought of me.. @129alphabet awwwww *(virtually) wiping off your tears* you sound like you need a hug. *virtual hug* sent! I re-read my post, and OMG! I really did seem like a broken-hearted girl weeping... But yeah! I guess i needed that virtual hug... ( Maybe because I don't want to be delusional anymore that It's just so frustrating how they are not together for real =)) ) <--- i guess i'm also at a point of no return.. because the ship had sailed and already in the middle of the ocean---- and I can't swim!! So yes! I shall stay in the ship! =)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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