Fantasy (beat By Kenji Astro)

[Guest iRAP]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.c...&songID=3894496 =]

[Guest IM TOKKI]

wow sounds good. sounds better than the japanese version. =D

[Guest iRAP]

yay thanks ;; i need to fix it i think

EDIT- or not lol didnt realize it did it by itself lol

[Guest Raix]

I usually don't comment on rap because I don't know enough to but here we go...

I honestly can't understand what you're saying =/ Especially ni the second verse. I don't like the chorus effect on some of the words. A bit too much for me.

Okay, ignore my comments, I have no idea what I'm talking about =x

Besides that, I think it sounds okay xD

[Guest LISTEN]

might want to flex your stomach when you rap. or filter your voice.

the second verse needs work on volume control and you need more emotion in your voice.

also work on pronouciation and fitting your lyrics to the beat.

otherwise- keep elevating homey! dont stop the grind.

[Guest mikez]

1st verse was nice, 2nd one was weird, kinda off and tired i guess, enounciate and more and it would be good, seems like to rap too fast and sometimes theres not enough lyrics within your bar.

btw. where you get the beat from?

[NAN]

WHOA... wtff.. hahhaha that was me in the beginning yelling "KENJI KUN DAI SUKI!" O__O haahah

Anyway.... the first verse is nice. the second verse is really weak and lazy. i like the style like that.. but the volume needs to be louder.