Guest Raix Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 Re-mixed and rewritten.You can fly sky high~ You guys might remember this from Round 2 of Soompi Idol. Where I got around 3 or 4 votes? xD Thanks to whoever voted for me <3 Anyway, before I entered this song. I did 2 takes. In the first one, the rapping was okay and the chorus handled heavy autotuning pretty well while in the 2nd take, the rapping was good, the chorus had harmonies but couldn't autotune without getting all choppy. So for another competition, I mixed in both takes and got my final mix, not the best, but better haha Just so you know, I don't autotune my singing, ever. Usually anyway. I just wanted to robotisize (wt...is that a word?) my voice for this because it just sounded so...bad. But yeah. Hope the rapping's decent. It's cool to see a bunch of girls rappnig now ^^ I know its not as impressive since it's in English, but I had to rewrite it or else my tongue would...fall on itself or something >_o I posted this thread for you to critique. So please do so ^^ I didn't get much of a chance during SI, although I appreciate what the judge's said =D PS I apologize for my horrible, horrible Korean and the singing. >< It's a hard song to sing for me. ._.; The lyrics if anyone wants to know what I'm mumbling about haha Fly Originally by Epik High, Rewritten by Rai Translation credits to Yoonie@Aheeyah - Verse 1 - 힘들죠? (힘들죠) [isn't it tough? (It's tough)] Getting by everyday when you really don’t know You’re in today, will you stay or are you out tomorrow? Don’t know where to go Left or right, just one wrong turn and it’s gone Take it all in, gotta learn to glide by Spread your wings cos You can fly When you wake up in the morning Curtains drawn, let the sunshine in Even when it’s completely dark Silver lining’s there, look hard enough Oops you fell, get back up again Remember why you’re in this game again Take a deep breath, you’ll be fine Spread your wings cos - Chorus - You can fly (No matter what anyone says, I won’t give up that easily) Higher 저 하늘위에 새들보다 (No matter what anyone says, I won’t give up on my dream) [Than the birds in the sky] You can fly (No matter what anyone says, I won’t give up that easily) Higher 단 하나뿐인 그대와 나 (No matter what anyone says, I won’t give up on my dream) [Than the birds in the sky] <= I got 'Just you and me' in a translator =/ You can fly 세상이 뭐라고 말해도 [No matter what the world says] Fly, fly, get em up high No matter what they say just go, go Fly 사랑이 널두고 떠나도 [Even if love leaves you behind] Fly, fly get em up high... - Bridge - You can fly Even when you think everything is lost You can fly Even when you’re without the ones you love You can fly Even when it’s too painful to go on You can fly You’ve got to fly sky high! - Verse 2 - So you think you’re stuck, got nowhere to go Keep on kicking but never reach the goal? Even when you think you’ve gotten pretty far You’re thrown right back, to the very start Fight back! Never give up keep on going Though people try to bring you down, take it knowing Your dreams and hopes, stay strong and they’ll never die Spread your wings, let’s go everybody fly - Chorus - 날개를 피고 You can fly [spread your wings] - Verse 3 - Every now and then my dreams start to fade With every fall and failure something dies away And every single time I close my eyes I see what I want and wonder why I try But slowly and steady, I’m getting closer still I’m good enough to get there, I know I will The obstacles I face, I’ll get over in time The darker the night, the brighter stars will shine - Chorus - As you can tell, I based the lyrics off the original. The last line of verse 3 is exactly the same, just translated. I really like that line. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xx0_gigi Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 it's sooo cool!!!! i like it~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Pinaiicolada Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 AWESOME!~ haha can ya add yur lyrics? <3 That'd be nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest amurokenji Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 haha i like this .. i think in your flow you should have more words in your lines .. btu this was good.. it made my day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rufus. Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Aww, the singing wasn't bad--I liked it, especially the chorus. Female rappers are awesome <3 Haha I wish I could rap. T_T;; I liked that you re-wrote (I'm kinda lacking sleep; is "re-wrote" a word? lol it sounds funny :x) the lyrics. I agree with amurokenji on having more words in the lines. The flow in the first verse sounds slightly awkward to me, but it's really slight, so it's not too big of a deal. Other than that, I really liked this. Great job, Rai! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ULETGO Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 I like the chorus part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dark intuitions Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 long time no see Loving it as always When are we going to collab?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Soochi Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 This sounds awesome ^^ In the beginning it sounds sort of messy, like it's missing something. Also, it could be only my computer, but at times it sounds like the music is louder than your voice. Other than that, it sounds great! Yay more female rappers! xD I do rap (sort of) but never much in English (unless it's in the song) only in Japanese. So if you wanna team up, let me know ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sikkony Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 Yo dawg, that was good stuff. Really enjoyed the whole rendition, props for the lyrics and rewriting the song yourself, takes effort. Your singing was really smooth, I really liked it. The singing sounded slightly under powered compared to your rap, but the singing itself was definitely good stuff. =]~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritzy! Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 oo lala well most liked youro rapping over signing but i def. liked the singing over rapping good job! take sskills to rewrite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Raix Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 Pinaiicolada: I'll add them later on ^^ amurokenji Yeah I noticed that at times. The first verse is more based on the original though. Thanks. Tempo: How can you say you can't rap? Dude. You can rap in Korean, write awesome full original songs <3 Thanks for commenting! Chris: Hols in 2 weeks! And I should be free of assignments now =DD Remind me of what I'm meant to sing haha Soochi: I'd love to collab with you. I got a few Japanese songs I wanna cover. I do have that problem with mixing. Gotta figure out how to push out the vocals haha sikkony: Yeah, singing was so hard though >< Will reply the rest later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koreangirl143 Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 wow... i love the chorus!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest kakasensai Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 Wow Nice lyrics dang in english wow even more nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Raix Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 Added the lyrics. Though I doubt anyone cares about this now xDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yukiya88 Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 Wow! I really like your version <3 I like how you wrote the lyrics too. This is really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest geneyoonit Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 hey~ long time no talk~ i loved it.. seroiusly @ first u sounded cute, then it sounded cooll.. and then it was just awesome ><!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 4th.ave.cafe Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 wow O_O I like it. I think the rhythm of your rap is a bit awkward...like it pauses at weird parts but other than that, it's nice ! I enjoyed listening to it ^^ Very nice~ And your Korean sounds cute ^^~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest miki_chan Posted December 25, 2007 Share Posted December 25, 2007 Omgshh I dont know what to say. THIS IS REALLY GOOD. I like to see more stuff from you :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Raix Posted January 8, 2008 Share Posted January 8, 2008 gene: zmg. its been soooo long =DDD Thank you for listening <3 rainy.seasons: Yeah, my flow or whatever. I need to learn how to get good hahaha I can't get it to roll nicely T_T Thanks for listening hangbok_2007: Confused? When? xD Yeah, my mixing is like that. I need to learn how to get the vocals to pop more >< Thank you~ Thank you everyone that's listened. I should really stop bumping ^^;; But I'd like critiques and whatnot haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ss5o1em Posted January 8, 2008 Share Posted January 8, 2008 hey...it sounds really good ^^ i like everything bout it... maybe next time u should use a better mic or something cos ur voice sounds muffled at times...jst a tip ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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