Neyo - One In A Million Female Rap

[xx_sunshine_xx]

hi ~~

So yeah i've just done a rap cover of Neyo's One In A Million, so check it out and give some tips¬! ^___^

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THANK  YOU!!!

[RiderKamen]

I believe if you kept the flow on your first two bars and add subtle variations with that flow, it could be something nice.

[Guest 1992LK]

I really love your accent haha it was fresh and thats a good thing =] keep the good work going!

[xx_sunshine_xx]

I believe if you kept the flow on your first two bars and add subtle variations with that flow, it could be something nice.

Thank you for commenting And I'll bear that in mind next time ^___^

I really love your accent haha it was fresh and thats a good thing =] keep the good work going!

Aww thank you! 

[Guest dark intuitions]

Cute!

I wasn't quite sure you nailed the pitch in the hook at the end, but I suspect if you weren't sitting down (at least, that's what I think you were doing?) that both your flow and pitch could be improved! Otherwise, I quite liked it!