everlasting~

[Guest xkiseki]

zutto zutto <3

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pageartist.cfm?bandID=325556 i tried it again... but i still get flat around the end. any tips on how to make my voice less flat? (Does the question even make sense?) i hate mixing, i tired to mix here.... didn't do too good of a job oh wellz... comments and advice much appreciated

[Guest Raix]

Oh, you haven't heard my flat notes. It's sad to the point you'd cry.

I think you're singing it higher than the original but I'm not sure. It might be why you're a bit flat.

Yup, you're singing it in the wrong key. That's why you go flat. I like how you're doing the chorus but it's really really offkey ><" I want you to practise with the song and redo it ^^ Because it'd sound so much better.

[Guest xkiseki]

thanks for your reply, i'll re-record it a lower key after i feel better.

[Guest PrincessBoa]

awww hope u get better ;/... lets hope to see u sing this song again when you're feeling better

*huggies*

PrincessBoa

[Guest xkiseki]

i attempted it again.... any advice?

[Guest IHMJack]

Here are some of the bad points,

1. Everything is REALLY deaf toned and off pitch.

2. You sound VERY weak, so weak that you sound like you are about to cry while singing.

3. Off beat here and there.

Here are some good points,

with practice you can sound good, you have good cute voice.

[Guest ADORE.you]

ooh not bad.. good job for trying it out =)

[Guest xkiseki]

ihmjack, thank you for your comments. i'll attempt to re-record when i have time.

jewny... you are too sweet. thank you

much appreciated for the comments people.