::Only Hope::

[Guest onigiri_kun]

credits to NIE NIE

thanx to nie nie for the instrumental~ I did this in liek 30 minutes~ one of my favourite english songs EVER! please take a listen^^

[ritzy!]

Ooh.. super nice!!

One of my fave. songs too!!

I think you did a good job, just need to try work in the pronounciation and itd be cool . ^^;

[Guest lovablekrnstar63]

not bad

i was like 0.0 when it was a guy singing it

b/c ive never heard a guy sing it..

not to be sterotypical.. '

critics:

your tone sounds a little air and your vibratto is really shallow

(thats not a bad thing but i have this thing against shallow vibrattos.. its a total personal thing)

and you take breaths in the middle of some words

learn to control your breathing

and in the chorus you dont build and there's no climax

and the dynamics are ALMOST the same all throughout

learn to control your voice & breathing

and it'd be really good!

great job =]

[Guest Raix]

^ Did you know that in the movie a guy sings part of it? xD

Well...It's nice that you're singing more English songs <3 I love this song, but I could never do the bridge so I gave up on recording it xD

When going to the chorus, you need to be louder, its like the climax along with the bridge. It's better the second time around.

Forget about singing softly. Just let it all out xD

Like I said, the bridge needs to be louder, when you start "at the top of my lungs..." that's great.

It's really good that you didn't copy the original song ^^

Basically, don't stay soft throughout the whole song and a teeny bit more emotion but besides that, it's good

[Guest smirk_it]

not bad

i was like 0.0 when it was a guy singing it

b/c ive never heard a guy sing it..

not to be sterotypical.. '

critics:

your tone sounds a little air and your vibratto is really shallow

(thats not a bad thing but i have this thing against shallow vibrattos.. its a total personal thing)

and you take breaths in the middle of some words

learn to control your breathing

and in the chorus you dont build and there's no climax

and the dynamics are ALMOST the same all throughout

learn to control your voice & breathing

and it'd be really good!

great job =]

the original version was by a boy band.

anyhow good job!

[Guest onigiri_kun]

yea~ the song was sung by switchfoot~

I tried to sing this song softly but I guess it's too soft ne~

maybe I'll try again soon!

do you think I should move the register up by one?

and about my vibratio~ should I make it a bit stronger??

[Guest falling U P]

the original song was.. i believe, sung by switchfoot. i may be wrong but that's what i remember. =)

but good job, i think that with a little more pratice, you'd do very well! the song lack a lot of personality and your voice sounded kinda boring... more emotion will do but other than that, i think you did well! great job!