Guest onigiri_kun Posted February 10, 2006 Share Posted February 10, 2006 credits to NIE NIEthanx to nie nie for the instrumental~ I did this in liek 30 minutes~ one of my favourite english songs EVER! please take a listen^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritzy! Posted February 10, 2006 Share Posted February 10, 2006 Ooh.. super nice!! One of my fave. songs too!! I think you did a good job, just need to try work in the pronounciation and itd be cool . ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest lovablekrnstar63 Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 not bad i was like 0.0 when it was a guy singing it b/c ive never heard a guy sing it.. not to be sterotypical.. ' critics: your tone sounds a little air and your vibratto is really shallow (thats not a bad thing but i have this thing against shallow vibrattos.. its a total personal thing) and you take breaths in the middle of some words learn to control your breathing and in the chorus you dont build and there's no climax and the dynamics are ALMOST the same all throughout learn to control your voice & breathing and it'd be really good! great job =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Raix Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 ^ Did you know that in the movie a guy sings part of it? xD Well...It's nice that you're singing more English songs <3 I love this song, but I could never do the bridge so I gave up on recording it xD When going to the chorus, you need to be louder, its like the climax along with the bridge. It's better the second time around. Forget about singing softly. Just let it all out xD Like I said, the bridge needs to be louder, when you start "at the top of my lungs..." that's great. It's really good that you didn't copy the original song ^^ Basically, don't stay soft throughout the whole song and a teeny bit more emotion but besides that, it's good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest smirk_it Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 not bad i was like 0.0 when it was a guy singing it b/c ive never heard a guy sing it.. not to be sterotypical.. ' critics: your tone sounds a little air and your vibratto is really shallow (thats not a bad thing but i have this thing against shallow vibrattos.. its a total personal thing) and you take breaths in the middle of some words learn to control your breathing and in the chorus you dont build and there's no climax and the dynamics are ALMOST the same all throughout learn to control your voice & breathing and it'd be really good! great job =] the original version was by a boy band. anyhow good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest onigiri_kun Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 yea~ the song was sung by switchfoot~ I tried to sing this song softly but I guess it's too soft ne~ maybe I'll try again soon! do you think I should move the register up by one? and about my vibratio~ should I make it a bit stronger?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest falling U P Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 the original song was.. i believe, sung by switchfoot. i may be wrong but that's what i remember. =) but good job, i think that with a little more pratice, you'd do very well! the song lack a lot of personality and your voice sounded kinda boring... more emotion will do but other than that, i think you did well! great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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