Guest xkiseki Posted March 19, 2006 Share Posted March 19, 2006 chae yeon : white snow, BoA: my sweetiehttp://www.soundclick.com/xkiseki i removed the clips, no more songs until i can work on my pitches, haha, thanks for the advice fantasiimaker ps i tried to do everlasting again.... warning... turn down the volume Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest fantasiimaker Posted March 20, 2006 Share Posted March 20, 2006 Everlasting - sounds like you're forcing the pronounciation a bit. Give BoA (ok even her Japanese isn't perfect) a closer listen, then sing along with her once or twice to get a good, comfortable feel for the lyrics. You go off pitch quite a bit on the ends of lines, like the verse right before the chorus. Also, the way you're presenting the song emotion-wise feels a bit awkward. I can't really describe it. Nice try though =) Keep working on it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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