some new songs in SoundClick

[Guest xkiseki]

chae yeon : white snow, BoA: my sweetie

http://www.soundclick.com/xkiseki i removed the clips, no more songs until i can work on my pitches, haha, thanks for the advice fantasiimaker ps i tried to do everlasting again.... warning... turn down the volume

[Guest fantasiimaker]

Everlasting - sounds like you're forcing the pronounciation a bit. Give BoA (ok even her Japanese isn't perfect) a closer listen, then sing along with her once or twice to get a good, comfortable feel for the lyrics.

You go off pitch quite a bit on the ends of lines, like the verse right before the chorus. Also, the way you're presenting the song emotion-wise feels a bit awkward. I can't really describe it. Nice try though =)

Keep working on it!