--*because Of You [re-sung]

[xXFilipina_DreamerXx]

GBS [GELLY_BELLY STYLE] xD.

Did a song of "Because of You" and made a stupid little myspace, because Soundclick was being mean. It was originally my music site for myspace, if they didn't that song on myspace. It's no where near known and I don't plan on showing many of my friends. I just wanted to get some feedback on this song. I absolutely love this song! It's so catchy and it never seems to stop me from singing it everytime I hear it. I love NeYo's voice. His songs are totally my style *pulls out comb and combs hair*. LOL. I hope you enjoy. It's only a snippet, but I hope you guys like it anyway. Please give some feedback on what I should work on. Most of this was taken while I was sick, so sorry if I sound quite NASALLY xD.

NOTE: There is a part where I go sharp. haha It's only one part and it's directly on the lyrics "Even if I did, I don't know if I would quit" the first round xD. I'm WAY TOO LAZY TO FIX IT xD. I seriously don't care. I did only two parts with harmony. I wanted to put more...but LAZY ME! xD.

I TRIED TO PUT "FEEL" in this song. xD.

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea...endid=201344595

What'd you think?! <33

Anyone know any other good NEYO songs? I wanna sing more, but I don't know other songs. I don't listen to American much. I plan on singing "SEXY LOVE" what cha think?! xD

[xXFilipina_DreamerXx]

No one?! REALLY?! :[.

[ritzy!]

just gotta give it time for the replies to rush in haha..

well it's already established tha tyou can sing but hmm

you can stay on pitch and in tune so that's good but

yeah too nasally and sounds too whiny

[bORicha.]

Wow, I'd expect more of a soft song from you- like an utada hikaru song or something. haha

Nice job; the nasally-ness ( I didn't know what else to call it.) didn't bother me too much, but yeah, it was a bit "whiny" sounding.

I did sound Neyo-ish though, if that makes any sense at all. lol I guess I mean that "FEEL" you mentioned. :]

And I love the song sexy love, even if it's over played. haha

(Like all of the Neyo songs I've heard are overplayed.)

[Guest imperial13]

zomg neyo buddies ;p it's sung pretty well (like so sick ) but i'm sorry, have to agree with the others, it does sound a bit nasally x.x i still like it though

[Guest SailorBoy62]

Even though you did a good job, I'd actually recommend you sing like Paula DeAnda or Rihanna songs instead of more Ne-Yo tracks 'cause I think they're in your range and you'd give them a really good like flavor, 'cause you've got this very smooth tone with nice R&B inflections, but it's got a nice edginess to it.

You actually seem to have a slight lisp, but I dunno if it's 'cause of the mic or not. The choir style harmonies during the "my addiction" were also a little flat. Your voice is really good though.

[xXFilipina_DreamerXx]

Thank you so much everyone. Yes. I hate the sudden change of weathers and yes I was trying to keep some notes in chest but because of my sickness it came out pretty whiney. I thank everyone for the suggestions. ^^ I'll try working on it. <33

SailorBoy - Hmmm. I'm actually trying out Paula. I love her voice, and her abrado comes out great with the low notes. The issue is only the low notes -.-;; GOTTA OPEN UP THE CHEST! But I'll try it! Thank you so much for the suggestion! <3

[Guest Sunkiss*Nhixxie]

good job! aside from the nasally hints here and there,

you sang the song very nicely. GO PINOY POWER! LOL.

(that's me being highly proud of our country. LOL. :x)

--Nhixxie