Guest tony_arc Posted December 7, 2005 Share Posted December 7, 2005 Written by Me hee... i did this a while ago... and i was bored so here it is! MY VERSION of HANDS BY KODA KUMI... Sorri.. but it only works on Lo-Fi for some reason... HANDS- ENGLISH VERSION constructive criticism is ALWAYS welcome :-D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Brian Posted December 8, 2005 Share Posted December 8, 2005 haha, hi-fi sounds funny. that happened to my song too. some parts sound really nice. some just need more work. try putting more emotion into it. i love the lyrics. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest k_c_pop_bi7_b04 Posted December 8, 2005 Share Posted December 8, 2005 i've never heard this song before .. but i like ur english version .. except. as said be4 u need more emotion -- this suppose to be female song . - find another duet or other miss soompi to sing ur version for you .. a great piece .. could u post the lyrics? . haha startin to like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cutie*Songstress Posted December 8, 2005 Share Posted December 8, 2005 I LOVE the lyrics. Beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Vaerie Posted December 8, 2005 Share Posted December 8, 2005 You have a nice voice...but the way you're singingjust sounds...flat and nasally. Might I suggest trying to fix those before putting more emotion into it like the others said? Though I couldn't do much better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tony_arc Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 hee... yea... my nose was stuffed that day lol~... hee.. aniwAIS... some of u wanted the lyrics... "Hands (english version)" (Koda Kumi) * Why do things shatter when they come to MY HANDS? All memories and all the hopes and dreams, Which seem to bring the happiness to my life. They always seem to fade away... Verse 1: The tears are dripping slowly, Along the ties that are between our love. I slowly see pain rising, As your mask continues smiling. The things you've done to keep me from crumbling to the ground, Has slowly drifted onto you... As tears continue to flow like the river, I try so hard but always starts to breakdown. And so I try to peel my heart from you... So you would not feel more pain. REPEAT * Verse 2 I do not comprehend this. Why do you still save me from every fall? When it would prove much better To just let go of me. But you've continued to hold onto me so desparately... Even if it was drawing ur own strengths. I see the pain within both of your eyes. It slowly builds within your fighting soul. And yet still you continue to help me baby I really don't understand... REPEAT * Bridge The first time we have held hands... Has brought so much happiness... (so much happiness) Its time to heal the ailness And set you free from this HOLD... Time and time you fought to keep me going. You held on saying "Don't Let Me Go", But I can see that you're hurting slowly. Why do you let this be so? When you first reached and held onto MY HANDS, You smiled softly saying "It'll all be OK". But you really began to hurt slowly. Why do you continue this way? ...Now I'll set you free from MY HANDS. hee.. i'll try to make a better version.. haha~ XP P.S. if any grl here wanna sing it... hee... feel free to ... just credit for the lyrics haha... and i have instrumental if anione needs it.. hee.. kk :-D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest the kite Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 oo i lke it ^^ youve got an awesome voice. uh huh and lovely lyrics <3 i`d love to sing this <33 but i dunno how to record =O so nvms hahahah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Celestial Child Posted December 10, 2005 Share Posted December 10, 2005 I wouldn't mind trying to sing this. Seriously, I'll try and hopefully I won't kill it. ...i'll need the instrumental. :x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tony_arc Posted December 10, 2005 Share Posted December 10, 2005 http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2CCTU1N...UB35NCRUW3XVH75 there's the instrumental for Koda Kumi- Hands... if anione wants it... Uploaded 12/10/05 12:15 AM EST :-D ima gonna sing this ova again~.. hee.. i wanna add more emotion! >: ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest the kite Posted December 11, 2005 Share Posted December 11, 2005 ^ teehee thanks <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MzBeciko Posted December 17, 2005 Share Posted December 17, 2005 oo i like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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