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30 minutes ago, GLT said:

Anyone has the link to BTS where Yukee got bitten by the horse? Thanks!

 

 

https://m.weibo.cn/1038980951/4363653241109582

19 minutes ago, sophiesyc said:

Thanks for the translation of the fan fiction. Please tell me there is a next chapter! 

 

Yes there is, hahaha 

 

I will try to translate when I read it

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Hey all, sharing my fanfic (english) here, mostly funny but still about ZM/ZWJ :)  Constructive critique very welcomed!

 

"Zhou Dian in the latest TV series is wonderful. Sometimes just for being loud and silly (e.g., his running jokes with Yangxiao) but sometimes, beyond entertaining, he is spot-on as a Shakespearean Fool (the comic fool character who is the one person who sees, and dares speak, the truth)."

https://archiveofourown.org/works/18...pters/44048941

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GrassLand Reunion PART 2:  Someone Else’s Son ?

 

 

PS: Please read Part 1 in previous page first.

 

 

Credit to Weibo Writer (Her link below)

 

 

https://media.weibo.cn/article?id=2309404363671626246576

 

 

“Minmin, I know you are still angry, I will not mind anything you said. I will keep you accompany till you forgive me and understand what you truly want”

 

 

Minmin Laughed coldly, “ZWJ, Dream on. My heart for you is dead. Do you understand? It is dead. Please do not pester me anymore. It will only make me hate you even more.”

 

 

She walked off after saying her piece. Wuji followed her from a distance. He knows that this takes time. If he force her to forgive him, it will only make things worst. Minmin is hurt badly by him, he need to give her time to heal.  He is willing to wait, even if it takes a lifetime, he is willing to wait for her to come back to him.

 

 

He followed her to where she stayed. But the sky is soon going to get dark. He need to find a place to stay too.

 

 

After Searching for some time, he found a family and cried asking for them to take him in, He told them that he has no family and has no pennies. He is willing to do some chores for them as long as they provide him a shelter and some meals. He hated himself for lying and deceiving others. But he need to find a place that is nearer to Minmin, so that he can seize every opportunity to patch back with her.

He has no other choice.

 

 

When Minmin is back to her Mongol Tent, she saw that her son is soundly asleep. Her heart is at peace.

 

 

2 years ago, she brought her father’s coffin back to Mongol. Along the way, she felt tired and fatigued, so tired that she can’t even felt her own presence anymore.

A Kind old Granny save her as she fainted in front of her Mongol Tent. Granny pitied her as she look frail, pale and weak. Seeing her with a Coffin, she knows that Minmin is a pitiful soul. So she saved her and took her in.

 

 

It was at this time. She discovered that she was 2 months pregnant.

 

 

When she knew that she is pregnant with Wuji’s child. She feel vexed and happy at the same time.

She is happy because the child is Wuji’s flesh and blood. Having this child to accompany her from now on, it feels like Wuji is always by her side. Her life is filled with Hope now.

She is vexed and upset because she know that this child will not have the chance to experience father’s love and care. She is worried for his feeling, when he grow up, knowing that he has no father unlike other kids. She is also worried that others will criticize him for having no father.

 

 

She told Granny that she and the Child’s father has broken up. Granny advised her to deliver the child, saying that this child is a gift from the Heaven. God knows that she is lonely, so he send this child to accompany her on behalf of his father.

 

 

Granny is a kind lady. Her husband and son are doing business in China, and will only come back once every few months. She is happy to have Minmin’s accompaniment.

 

 

However, Minmin is not happy. She feel that she is still lacking of something.

 

 

Day after day, her tummy has grown bigger. She can feel every movement of the Little inside her. She started to imagine and visualize how he will look like. Will he look like her more? Or will he look like Wuji? Is he a boy or a girl?  Granny predicted the baby to be a Girl based on her experience. Minmin smiled and said, “It doesn’t matter whether he is a boy or a girl. I will love him/her no matter what”

 

 

Sometimes, she thought to herself. If Wuji knows she is pregnant with their Child, what would his reaction be? But whenever she thought of this, she feel that her heart is in pain.

She gave him a choice to give up the position of Ming Sect Leader to be with her. He refused. From then onwards, they will have nothing more to do with each other.

Chance is given but he did not cherish. The best ending will be to forget each other.

 

 

There are some gossip mongers around where she stay, gossiping about her being unchaste and getting herself impregnated. They say that she is shameless, a richard simmons who like to seduce men.

 

 

Minmin did not care. She did not do anything against her conscience so she just laughed it off and was not afraid of what others said about her.

 

 

She buried her father in the Grassland, a place with beautiful scenery. This is their hometown. She knows that Her father love riding the horse, love peace, so He will definitely be happy to be buried here.

 

 

After Delivering her child, the child grew up fast. He is now able to crawl, walk and even talk. She gave him a name – Zhao Nian Niu. The Child follow her Han Surname Zhao. She could not think of any nice name. So she called him Nian Niu. Wuji used to call himself Zeng Ah Niu [Cow]. So Nian Niu means Missing Ah Niu [Cow].

 

 

She was a Princess in the past. She does not know how to take care of Children. Luckily for her, Granny is very helpful. Granny always Joke and say “Why not you let Nian Niu be my Godson?”

 

 

She knows that she is not a good mother. But she love him very much.

 

 

These days, Wuji helped the family who took him in with chores in the day time.  There isn’t much chores sometimes. He can visit Minmin frequently. And So he always did.

Daily, Minmin adorn simple Mongolian wear and tied up her hair with simple hairpin. She rides her horse on the grassland with Sun shining on her face. She is just as beautiful as he first met her.

 

 

Whenever he meet her, he said he wish to see her home. She reacted strongly. It seems like she has something to hide from him.

But Minmin has stopped being harsh towards him although she is still cold and aloof.

However, Wuji is contended as long as Minmin did not object to him staying by her side.

 

 

When he went back to the home of the family who took him in, he suddenly feel suspicious on why Minmin always reject him sending her home after she is done with Sheep herding.

And so when he is fetching water for the household, he tried to ask the lady owner of the household about Minmin .

 

 

“Sister, I see that the lady who stayed near our house, always behave reclusively, any idea if anything happened to her household?”

 

 

The lady replied with a disgusted expression, “Zeng, there is something you don’t know. This lady is very cunning and formidable. You better stay away from her and not to fall for her tricks. She is the reincarnation of Vixen.”

 

 

Wuji is not happy that This Auntie talked bad and criticised about Minmin but he wanted to know more, so He kept his anger under control. “Why did you say that?”

 

 

The Auntie knows that he, being new here, is not familiar with the surroundings yet. So she explained, “her name is Minmin. But I don’t know her full name. When she first came here, she brought a coffin along. How Unlucky! And ever since she came, all the men in this village like her very much. They all fight to pursue her love and want to marry her, and want to be intimate with her. But she is quite proud and conceited too. She did not give in to any of those men.”

 

 

Wuji could imagine. His Minmin is such a great beauty, smart and witty, it is not a surprise that so many men wish to woo her. But based on her temper and character , how would she give in and not show them her attitude?” Thinking of this, he smiled.

 

 

Auntie continued, “The most scary thing is, she delivered a child not long after she arrived at this place. Who knows how she got pregnant? Maybe she is the mistress of some Man outside and was chased out by people.”

 

 

Wuji was extremely shocked and he suddenly feel physically weak upon hearing that. He think to himself, “WHAT? Minmin has a child?”  Is she married to someone else? She had a child with other Man? Why didn’t she tell me?”

 

 

They both promise each other to be together forever. He also promised that no matter how difficult it is, he will always come back to her.

They used to love each other so much. Why did this happen? Did she forget their promise?

 

 

Wuji felt as if he is dead. He teared uncontrollably.

 

----- TO BE CONTINUED on TRANSLATION TOMORROW ------

 

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There are currently 8 parts of this weibo fan fic. For Grassland Réunion aftermath. 

 

I just completed translation part 1 & 2.

 

Please let me know if you guys want to Continue reading. Because I am afraid that I became a nuisance with all the long long posts. Hahaha

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1 minute ago, LaurenPanna said:

There are currently 8 parts of this weibo fan fic. For Grassland Réunion aftermath. 

 

I just completed translation part 1 & 2.

 

Please let me know if you guys want to Continue reading. Because I am afraid that I became a nuisance with all the long long posts. Hahaha

You made my day!!!!  I'm  happy to read all your postings. Please continue if you find some time to do the translation. I really really appreciate all your efforts. :love: 

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There are currently 8 parts of this weibo fan fic. For Grassland Réunion aftermath. 

 

I just completed translation part 1 & 2.

 

Please let me know if you guys want to Continue reading. Because I am afraid that I became a nuisance with all the long long posts. Hahaha

 Put it under spoiler so it won't be too long. Unless it's not allowed by mod, to put fanfic translation here, I wouldn't mind reading it since I don't have weibo acct to search for it. Cheers

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I find it funny that some of you want to heal from the high of this amazing drama. I personally don't want to:P This kind of feeling is rare, where you feel unsatisfied, wanting to have more material, analysing, making or finding fanfic/mv/gifs/stills, that's awesome, especially for a classic wuxia novel like HSDS. You should cherish it because one day it will be gone. I want to ride it all until I come down from this dopamine whenever it is. But while I'm still enjoying, I want to enjoy with other people that love it as much as I do and forcing my friends and family to watch it^_^. Cheers!

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4 minutes ago, kur4p1k4 said:

I find it funny that some of you want to heal from the high of this amazing drama. I personally don't want to:P This kind of feeling is rare, where you feel unsatisfied, wanting to have more material, analysing, making or finding fanfic/mv/gifs/stills, that's awesome, especially for a classic wuxia novel like HSDS. You should cherish it because one day it will be gone. I want to ride it all until I come down from this dopamine whenever it is. But while I'm still enjoying, I want to enjoy with other people that love it as much as I do and forcing my friends and family to watch it^_^. Cheers!

 

I want this high feeling to stay in a way that I don't feel upset over the thought of not being able to see this couple anymore. So I need healing :p

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Everyone, this is my first fanfic. Feel free to comment and criticize me. Need much feedback from you guys and for the novel purist just ignore my fanfic if it tainted ZM image.

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I'm starting the events from Lantern festival on eps 49. In my fanfic, the scene where Ming brotherhood forging the sword and sabre is omitted. I don't see the importance of these scenes so the eps 49 opened directly to the lantern festival.

 

"It's her...." Wuji's mind sharply shouted, suddenly the lantern on his hand fell to the water. The lady with the veil moved quickly, as if she had known she'd been compromised. Wuji abruptly chased her with his skill it's not hard to intercept her but he slowed down. He must be patient, this can be coincidence, there must be some situations.

 

"Better to observe this inn first, i need to know exactly the room." Wuji makes his mind calmly. He thought she had been dead but now he was wrong. Min Min definitely alive, he was happy, relieved but shocked also doubt about how to confront her. But while thinking, a sturdy man tapped his shoulder, he looked back and surprised to see the calmness in this man face. It's Fan Yao.

 

"Fan Yao pay respect to Jiaozhu, i believe you have many questions in your mind, your subordinate begged you to listen to some words for me before meeting her." His words just blatantly thrown out to Wuji's face.
"How impudent... You are scheming behind my back, i raised her tombs myself, you know how important she is in my life, how...". Before Wuji continues, Fan Yao kneeled down and had his face down and started to explain.

Fan Yao pulled out something from his sleeve. It's a small black jade pendant with words. The jade glow even though the color is black, Wuji immediately see the character carved on the jade. It looked like ancient words but unrecognisable characters. Fan yao explained "It's a treasure from our Shadow Clan, they are part of Ming Sect reporting directly and only to Ming leader. Their purpose is to acquire as much information as possible from the government for our interest. They are mainly spies, assasins, drug dealers, courtesans working undercover in Mongol capital. Our link is only this pendant, whenever they come reporting they must bring along this pendant. My knowledge are also limited, i only heard very few during my times with Yang Ding Tian. Until one day, when i already secured position in Temur manor, i met a little girl fainted near the Manor with this pendant and a letter."

 

"The letter only said for the finder to take care of this girl and that she's the only one left of her family. I immediately recognized the pendant and smuggled her into the manor. Fortunately, the real princess died of sudden illness the same  week so i was able to put new identity to her. This girl is extremely intelligent and bright in adapting. Prince Temur got many children from his wives and he seldom spent time at his manor because of his conquests and wars. This girl is Zhao Min."

 

Wuji's face stoned by the flash of history splashed to his face that instant. "And how long exactly, you planned to fool me and kept me in the dark?" Fan Yao kowtowed and repented "Forgive me Jiaozhu, but this girl has mind of her own. She was 12 when i found her. She knew exactly why she had been left near the manor area and even if she hadn't been found by me. She would make her own way of revenge. Shadow clan had been wiped out by the government in one night ambush, they had been exposed and she's the only survivor. Her targets are clear, she wants to exterminate the so-called righteous sects by using her royal identity and then work her way to the harem and kill Yuan dynasty emperor. I can't even control her, everything was her own plan including living double life and planning her own death."
Wuji face hardened, he won't waste time anymore this time "Leave me alone now, i want to enter her room now." Fan yao stepped aside knowing it's ZM turn now to take responsibility.

Escorted by the butler to the said room, Impatient Wuji smashed the door and found ZM sitting there "Why don't you come to me when you're already see me?" Tears in her eyes when their eyes meet, ZM can no longer uttered any words so she just ran to him and hugged him close. They are drowned inside their own world, just finding in each other embrace, for a while forgetting all the world weight on their shoulder.

ZWJ slowly come to his senses and muttered "do you know how much i missed you?, What happened? Fan yao said you lived double life all along, why?"
ZM slowly free herself from his embrace and walk away towards the table. She sit there, looking at her man "yes, but Min Min Temur had died, killed by her father for betraying her country for ZWJ, ZWJ mourned for her and set the grave as her wife's grave." ZWJ walked to the table and sat facing the woman. "I only know one thing, the woman who is sitting in front of me right now is the one face who come to me every night since we the first time we met.

Haunting me with her expression and swaying me with her emotions it's like my life is within her grasp from the day we lay our eyes on each other and yet she always left me." His voice softly pierced her heart. He looked dashing and handsome but at the same time so pitiful with his lonely eyes.
Their hands already entangled on the table, they don't even realize since when, maybe when he sit there he reach out for her hand or during conversation, they don't even know.

Wuji raised his tone now "i don't care who you are. I'm not letting you go forever." Min min smile and softly said "do you remember my 3 wishes? You already did 2 wishes and now here's the 3rd, my eyebrows are uneven and rather thin. I need you to paint them for me now." Wuji smiled, "even if you wished me to paint them forever, i would do it wholeheartedly."

Once he finished painting the eyebrows, both looked into the mirror. Slowly Wuji put his hands on both her cheeks and kiss her lips deeply. Min min responsively fold her arms to her defense now both her arms are in his chest and both hands in his shoulders. Wuji lowered his hands from her face now hugged her back tightly pushing her to the bed beside the table.

Wuji smell the same familiar smell first from the cup in their first hotpot dinner and also from the first kiss before he went to Shaolin. The fragrant so feminine, he got drunken deeply. This time, he deliberately take off her belt to undress her easily.....

( Ok i omitted this part before got banned by moderator. In my imagination, ZM won't give in easily during consummation she would bite his lips, scratch his back, etc. They also talked during consummation. After making account on archive of our own, i will post the steamy details there).

 

After the consummation, ZM wake up to sleeping Wuji by her side. She take her time   dress up and combing her hair. There's pain in her waist but she blushes happily. Her movements already waken Wuji long ago but he choose sit still by the bed and staring at his woman.

Wuji asked "tomorrow, come with me to Ming headquarters. I'm sure they will welcome you happily. You're one of us now."
Zhao min shocked "you awake ? Since when?" Wuji answered honestly "since you get off the bed"
Zhao min sharpened her eyes " what?? Zhang jiaochu, you really are something, behind all the proper decorum and chivalry code."
Wuji sighed, and helplessly talked "i just want to keep you by my side, you are already my woman so why can't we be together??"

"Zhang jiaochu, you are invicible and everyone lower his head on you yet you still don't know how the world goes... Who would believe my double life story, everyone would say you just making up story in order to marry me." Zhao min said this while reaching for his hand.

To be continued.....

 

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3 hours ago, LaurenPanna said:

There are currently 8 parts of this weibo fan fic. For Grassland Réunion aftermath. 

 

I just completed translation part 1 & 2.

 

Please let me know if you guys want to Continue reading. Because I am afraid that I became a nuisance with all the long long posts. Hahaha

Hi Lauren, you done a great job and thank you for translating. Please continue to translate as I love reading it.

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1 hour ago, graceeedwardmom said:

Everyone, this is my first fanfic. Feel free to comment and criticize me. Need much feedback from you guys and for the novel purist just ignore my fanfic if it tainted ZM image.

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I'm starting the events from Lantern festival on eps 49. In my fanfic, the scene where Ming brotherhood forging the sword and sabre is omitted. I don't see the importance of these scenes so the eps 49 opened directly to the lantern festival.

 

"It's her...." Wuji's mind sharply shouted, suddenly the lantern on his hand fell to the water. The lady with the veil moved quickly, as if she had known she'd been compromised. Wuji abruptly chased her with his skill it's not hard to intercept her but he slowed down. He must be patient, this can be coincidence, there must be some situations.

 

"Better to observe this inn first, i need to know exactly the room." Wuji makes his mind calmly. He thought she had been dead but now he was wrong. Min Min definitely alive, he was happy, relieved but shocked also doubt about how to confront her. But while thinking, a sturdy man tapped his shoulder, he looked back and surprised to see the calmness in this man face. It's Fan Yao.

 

"Fan Yao pay respect to Jiaozhu, i believe you have many questions in your mind, your subordinate begged you to listen to some words for me before meeting her." His words just blatantly thrown out to Wuji's face.
"How impudent... You are scheming behind my back, i raised her tombs myself, you know how important she is in my life, how...". Before Wuji continues, Fan Yao kneeled down and had his face down and started to explain.

Fan Yao pulled out something from his sleeve. It's a small black jade pendant with words. The jade glow even though the color is black, Wuji immediately see the character carved on the jade. It looked like ancient words but unrecognisable characters. Fan yao explained "It's a treasure from our Shadow Clan, they are part of Ming Sect reporting directly and only to Ming leader. Their purpose is to acquire as much information as possible from the government for our interest. They are mainly spies, assasins, drug dealers, courtesans working undercover in Mongol capital. Our link is only this pendant, whenever they come reporting they must bring along this pendant. My knowledge are also limited, i only heard very few during my times with Yang Ding Tian. Until one day, when i already secured position in Temur manor, i met a little girl fainted near the Manor with this pendant and a letter."

 

"The letter only said for the finder to take care of this girl and that she's the only one left of her family. I immediately recognized the pendant and smuggled her into the manor. Fortunately, the real princess died of sudden illness the same  week so i was able to put new identity to her. This girl is extremely intelligent and bright in adapting. Prince Temur got many children from his wives and he seldom spent time at his manor because of his conquests and wars. This girl is Zhao Min."

 

Wuji's face stoned by the flash of history splashed to his face that instant. "And how long exactly, you planned to fool me and kept me in the dark?" Fan Yao kowtowed and repented "Forgive me Jiaozhu, but this girl has mind of her own. She was 12 when i found her. She knew exactly why she had been left near the manor area and even if she hadn't been found by me. She would make her own way of revenge. Shadow clan had been wiped out by the government in one night ambush, they had been exposed and she's the only survivor. Her targets are clear, she wants to exterminate the so-called righteous sects by using her royal identity and then work her way to the harem and kill Yuan dynasty emperor. I can't even control her, everything was her own plan including living double life and planning her own death."
Wuji face hardened, he won't waste time anymore this time "Leave me alone now, i want to enter her room now." Fan yao stepped aside knowing it's ZM turn now to take responsibility.

Escorted by the butler to the said room, Impatient Wuji smashed the door and found ZM sitting there "Why don't you come to me when you're already see me?" Tears in her eyes when their eyes meet, ZM can no longer uttered any words so she just ran to him and hugged him close. They are drowned inside their own world, just finding in each other embrace, for a while forgetting all the world weight on their shoulder.

ZWJ slowly come to his senses and muttered "do you know how much i missed you?, What happened? Fan yao said you lived double life all along, why?"
ZM slowly free herself from his embrace and walk away towards the table. She sit there, looking at her man "yes, but Min Min Temur had died, killed by her father for betraying her country for ZWJ, ZWJ mourned for her and set the grave as her wife's grave." ZWJ walked to the table and sat facing the woman. "I only know one thing, the woman who is sitting in front of me right now is the one face who come to me every night since we the first time we met.

Haunting me with her expression and swaying me with her emotions it's like my life is within her grasp from the day we lay our eyes on each other and yet she always left me." His voice softly pierced her heart. He looked dashing and handsome but at the same time so pitiful with his lonely eyes.
Their hands already entangled on the table, they don't even realize since when, maybe when he sit there he reach out for her hand or during conversation, they don't even know.

Wuji raised his tone now "i don't care who you are. I'm not letting you go forever." Min min smile and softly said "do you remember my 3 wishes? You already did 2 wishes and now here's the 3rd, my eyebrows are uneven and rather thin. I need you to paint them for me now." Wuji smiled, "even if you wished me to paint them forever, i would do it wholeheartedly."

Once he finished painting the eyebrows, both looked into the mirror. Slowly Wuji put his hands on both her cheeks and kiss her lips deeply. Min min responsively fold her arms to her defense now both her arms are in his chest and both hands in his shoulders. Wuji lowered his hands from her face now hugged her back tightly pushing her to the bed beside the table.

Wuji smell the same familiar smell first from the cup in their first hotpot dinner and also from the first kiss before he went to Shaolin. The fragrant so feminine, he got drunken deeply. This time, he deliberately take off her belt to undress her easily.....

( Ok i omitted this part before got banned by moderator. In my imagination, ZM won't give in easily during consummation she would bite his lips, scratch his back, etc. They also talked during consummation. After making account on archive of our own, i will post the steamy details there).

 

After the consummation, ZM wake up to sleeping Wuji by her side. She take her time   dress up and combing her hair. There's pain in her waist but she blushes happily. Her movements already waken Wuji long ago but he choose sit still by the bed and staring at his woman.

Wuji asked "tomorrow, come with me to Ming headquarters. I'm sure they will welcome you happily. You're one of us now."
Zhao min shocked "you awake ? Since when?" Wuji answered honestly "since you get off the bed"
Zhao min sharpened her eyes " what?? Zhang jiaochu, you really are something, behind all the proper decorum and chivalry code."
Wuji sighed, and helplessly talked "i just want to keep you by my side, you are already my woman so why can't we be together??"

"Zhang jiaochu, you are invicible and everyone lower his head on you yet you still don't know how the world goes... Who would believe my double life story, everyone would say you just making up story in order to marry me." Zhao min said this while reaching for his hand.

To be continued.....

 

 

I love it!! Please keep this going!!! 

 

 

1 hour ago, bluesky888 said:

Hi Lauren, you done a great job and thank you for translating. Please continue to translate as I love reading it.

Thank you!! 

I really love reading and translating!! 

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2 hours ago, kur4p1k4 said:

I find it funny that some of you want to heal from the high of this amazing drama. I personally don't want to:P This kind of feeling is rare, where you feel unsatisfied, wanting to have more material, analysing, making or finding fanfic/mv/gifs/stills, that's awesome, especially for a classic wuxia novel like HSDS. You should cherish it because one day it will be gone. I want to ride it all until I come down from this dopamine whenever it is. But while I'm still enjoying, I want to enjoy with other people that love it as much as I do and forcing my friends and family to watch it^_^. Cheers!

I'm totally with you. lol This kind of feeling is rare indeed. I want to ride it all for sure. :lol:

 

So, I've made another round of gifs from BTS. :P

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Thank you for the gifs @ildiz

 

I heard there will be a KR version HSDS 2019. Is it true? 

 

I Rewatch episode 49 and I suddenly notice something. Not sure if you guys notice too. 

 

When Wuji release the lantern boat, MinMin give a "sigh" that make wuji sense her presence. Then after that Wuji turn over and chase after her, but accidentally bump into some kids. Then when he look up, he could not find her. His eyes were wide open. 

 

Then at this time i realise something!! Minmin was standing one side, very near him, she even lift up her white veil!!!! She was there holding the lantern boat. How coukd he miss her!! Hahaha do let me know if anyone notice this. V

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1 hour ago, graceeedwardmom said:

Everyone, this is my first fanfic. Feel free to comment and criticize me. Need much feedback from you guys and for the novel purist just ignore my fanfic if it tainted ZM image.

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I'm starting the events from Lantern festival on eps 49. In my fanfic, the scene where Ming brotherhood forging the sword and sabre is omitted. I don't see the importance of these scenes so the eps 49 opened directly to the lantern festival.

 

"It's her...." Wuji's mind sharply shouted, suddenly the lantern on his hand fell to the water. The lady with the veil moved quickly, as if she had known she'd been compromised. Wuji abruptly chased her with his skill it's not hard to intercept her but he slowed down. He must be patient, this can be coincidence, there must be some situations.

 

"Better to observe this inn first, i need to know exactly the room." Wuji makes his mind calmly. He thought she had been dead but now he was wrong. Min Min definitely alive, he was happy, relieved but shocked also doubt about how to confront her. But while thinking, a sturdy man tapped his shoulder, he looked back and surprised to see the calmness in this man face. It's Fan Yao.

 

"Fan Yao pay respect to Jiaozhu, i believe you have many questions in your mind, your subordinate begged you to listen to some words for me before meeting her." His words just blatantly thrown out to Wuji's face.
"How impudent... You are scheming behind my back, i raised her tombs myself, you know how important she is in my life, how...". Before Wuji continues, Fan Yao kneeled down and had his face down and started to explain.

Fan Yao pulled out something from his sleeve. It's a small black jade pendant with words. The jade glow even though the color is black, Wuji immediately see the character carved on the jade. It looked like ancient words but unrecognisable characters. Fan yao explained "It's a treasure from our Shadow Clan, they are part of Ming Sect reporting directly and only to Ming leader. Their purpose is to acquire as much information as possible from the government for our interest. They are mainly spies, assasins, drug dealers, courtesans working undercover in Mongol capital. Our link is only this pendant, whenever they come reporting they must bring along this pendant. My knowledge are also limited, i only heard very few during my times with Yang Ding Tian. Until one day, when i already secured position in Temur manor, i met a little girl fainted near the Manor with this pendant and a letter."

 

"The letter only said for the finder to take care of this girl and that she's the only one left of her family. I immediately recognized the pendant and smuggled her into the manor. Fortunately, the real princess died of sudden illness the same  week so i was able to put new identity to her. This girl is extremely intelligent and bright in adapting. Prince Temur got many children from his wives and he seldom spent time at his manor because of his conquests and wars. This girl is Zhao Min."

 

Wuji's face stoned by the flash of history splashed to his face that instant. "And how long exactly, you planned to fool me and kept me in the dark?" Fan Yao kowtowed and repented "Forgive me Jiaozhu, but this girl has mind of her own. She was 12 when i found her. She knew exactly why she had been left near the manor area and even if she hadn't been found by me. She would make her own way of revenge. Shadow clan had been wiped out by the government in one night ambush, they had been exposed and she's the only survivor. Her targets are clear, she wants to exterminate the so-called righteous sects by using her royal identity and then work her way to the harem and kill Yuan dynasty emperor. I can't even control her, everything was her own plan including living double life and planning her own death."
Wuji face hardened, he won't waste time anymore this time "Leave me alone now, i want to enter her room now." Fan yao stepped aside knowing it's ZM turn now to take responsibility.

Escorted by the butler to the said room, Impatient Wuji smashed the door and found ZM sitting there "Why don't you come to me when you're already see me?" Tears in her eyes when their eyes meet, ZM can no longer uttered any words so she just ran to him and hugged him close. They are drowned inside their own world, just finding in each other embrace, for a while forgetting all the world weight on their shoulder.

ZWJ slowly come to his senses and muttered "do you know how much i missed you?, What happened? Fan yao said you lived double life all along, why?"
ZM slowly free herself from his embrace and walk away towards the table. She sit there, looking at her man "yes, but Min Min Temur had died, killed by her father for betraying her country for ZWJ, ZWJ mourned for her and set the grave as her wife's grave." ZWJ walked to the table and sat facing the woman. "I only know one thing, the woman who is sitting in front of me right now is the one face who come to me every night since we the first time we met.

Haunting me with her expression and swaying me with her emotions it's like my life is within her grasp from the day we lay our eyes on each other and yet she always left me." His voice softly pierced her heart. He looked dashing and handsome but at the same time so pitiful with his lonely eyes.
Their hands already entangled on the table, they don't even realize since when, maybe when he sit there he reach out for her hand or during conversation, they don't even know.

Wuji raised his tone now "i don't care who you are. I'm not letting you go forever." Min min smile and softly said "do you remember my 3 wishes? You already did 2 wishes and now here's the 3rd, my eyebrows are uneven and rather thin. I need you to paint them for me now." Wuji smiled, "even if you wished me to paint them forever, i would do it wholeheartedly."

Once he finished painting the eyebrows, both looked into the mirror. Slowly Wuji put his hands on both her cheeks and kiss her lips deeply. Min min responsively fold her arms to her defense now both her arms are in his chest and both hands in his shoulders. Wuji lowered his hands from her face now hugged her back tightly pushing her to the bed beside the table.

Wuji smell the same familiar smell first from the cup in their first hotpot dinner and also from the first kiss before he went to Shaolin. The fragrant so feminine, he got drunken deeply. This time, he deliberately take off her belt to undress her easily.....

( Ok i omitted this part before got banned by moderator. In my imagination, ZM won't give in easily during consummation she would bite his lips, scratch his back, etc. They also talked during consummation. After making account on archive of our own, i will post the steamy details there).

 

After the consummation, ZM wake up to sleeping Wuji by her side. She take her time   dress up and combing her hair. There's pain in her waist but she blushes happily. Her movements already waken Wuji long ago but he choose sit still by the bed and staring at his woman.

Wuji asked "tomorrow, come with me to Ming headquarters. I'm sure they will welcome you happily. You're one of us now."
Zhao min shocked "you awake ? Since when?" Wuji answered honestly "since you get off the bed"
Zhao min sharpened her eyes " what?? Zhang jiaochu, you really are something, behind all the proper decorum and chivalry code."
Wuji sighed, and helplessly talked "i just want to keep you by my side, you are already my woman so why can't we be together??"

"Zhang jiaochu, you are invicible and everyone lower his head on you yet you still don't know how the world goes... Who would believe my double life story, everyone would say you just making up story in order to marry me." Zhao min said this while reaching for his hand.

To be continued.....

 

I like your fanfic. Please keep writing as I love to read it. Thank you

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5 hours ago, Yitian_fan said:

Hey all, sharing my fanfic (english) here, mostly funny but still about ZM/ZWJ :)  Constructive critique very welcomed!

 

"Zhou Dian in the latest TV series is wonderful. Sometimes just for being loud and silly (e.g., his running jokes with Yangxiao) but sometimes, beyond entertaining, he is spot-on as a Shakespearean Fool (the comic fool character who is the one person who sees, and dares speak, the truth)."

https://archiveofourown.org/works/18...pters/44048941

It's really good! I love your style of writing and the infusion of humor in it. I also like the emotionally charged ones in previous chapters. Please write more! If you are taking requests, I would love some "missing scenes" fanfic as well. 

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