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Novel comparisons for Episode 13

Gu Hai = GH, Bai LuoYin = BLY, You Qi = YQ, Yang Meng = YM

 

Source: Are you addicted, Vol. 1, Ch. 94, 95, 96, 97, 98, 107 & 108. Credits to author Chai JiDan.

 

1. Part from Ch. 94: Winning streak in mahjong

Spoiler

>> This is the same as the episode. It's kinda funny how GH explained BLY's super memory to their friends. After saying it, I guess that's the last time they will come over for mahjong right? xD

**And GH strikes again with his tease when counting their winnings:

GH: "Twelve thousands in total. You are my good wifey after all."

BLY: "Say that again and see if I'll castrate you or not."

GH: "Castrate me? You will have to find a basin big enough for that."

2. Ch. 95:

Spoiler

Missing from the episode: BLY's ice-cream craving

In school, everyone was doing a mass exercise. After that, GH & BLY were heading back to their classroom. Then, BLY said that he suddenly feels like having ice-cream. GH rebutted that the season now is so cold already. BLY insisted but GH rejected him with a strict tone. Then, BLY had some rebellious thoughts and turned towards the school supermart. GH chased him and finally decided to get it for him. The supermart was so packed. GH had to squeeze to the freezer to get the ice-cream. "In the past, even if it's not to the supermart, getting something for others is an unpleasant feeling of lowering his status."

>> It's cute how GH can't help but fulfill BLY's cravings. <3

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Same as the episode: A sour ice-cream session

YM came to find BLY and ate the ice-cream that GH got from the supermart just for BLY. And this is the start of a series of discontentment from GH.

>> It's good to see that the episode did a voiceover for GH's thoughts, which was in the novel.

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Generally same as the episode: YM complaining to BLY about YQ

**Different: 3 of them headed back to class. YM went past level 2 where his classroom is and went to level 3, where BLY and GH's classroom in. He told GH that he wanted to talk to BLY for a while. GH went back into class first. Note: In the episode, the chat between YM & BLY started with YM dragging BLY out of class instead.

>> Uh oh.

**Same: While YM was saying how YQ has been blocking his way at the school gate, YQ walked over and smiled only at BLY. When BLY returned to class, he found out GH took his worksheet. GH refused to admit it and said, "Who told you to be absent when the worksheets were given out? Do you still need it? Go chat! Chat as much as you want. Chat for one period and forget about doing the worksheet."

>> This is the second action of jealousy from GH. Wait for the last one. Also, the novel describes YM quite adorably here, using words like 'cat' and 'kid' on him. Actor Chen Wen embodies YM's personality pretty well.

**Missing from the episode: The bruise

At the end of the period, YM came back again. He called for BLY. And the novel writes:

BLY stood up. Someone from behind kick his chair fiercely. The chair leg knocked against BLY's leg. And with this fierce hit, BLY took a deep breath, suppressed his anger, pushed his chair, and walked out of the classroom without batting an eye at GH.

>> This is how BLY's bruise came about. Urgh. GH's hooligan trait is such a pain. He's hurting BLY!

 

**Same: YM continued to complain how YQ also has been blocking his way at his classroom even before his period ends. Seeing something's amiss, BLY went to confront YQ. YQ acted aloof. GH smacked the table and shouted to tell them to quiet down.

>> Stealing worksheet, kicking the chair and now smacking the table. Gosh, GH.

3. Ch. 96:

Spoiler

**YM kept coming back to look BLY in between lessons. After school, YM wanted to go home together with BLY. BLY told GH all 3 of them will go back together, but GH totally ignore BLY. GH rode off. BLY concluded that YQ did 'harass' YM but to him, it wasn't anything serious to be alarmed. BLY sent YM to his doorstep and went back his house. GH was standing there with many cigarette butts at his feet.

>> GH's jealousy is rather ridiculous. YM is BLY's childhood buddy. YM behaves around BLY, just like how GH's buddies treat GH.

More details from the novel & a missing part from the episode:

**GH kept standing outside, after BLY's dad, Bai Han Qi (BHQ), tried to get him in. And the novel writes:

BLY used much strength to pull BHQ, dragging him in step-by-step. GH stared at BLY, not saying a word, but he was screaming inside countless times: You really bear to leave me outside? Can't you say something to please me? Sometimes, guys are soft-hearted too. We also need some gentleness, right?

"It's raining ice crystals!"

BHQ sighed as he kept looking towards the door.

BLY glanced at the floor. Ice crystals covered the shoes with a layer of frost. He didn't enter the house all this while. He was kept himself busy with things in the yard. Actually, he kept feeling the temperature outside so that he would know when the temperature drops.

After BHQ said that, BLY finally went back into the house.

After about ten minutes, BLY dashed through the door with a frown.

GH was still standing there with much diligence, just like a soldier doing his guard duty.

BLY puffed a few mouthful of cold air, and said angrily, "Come in!"

Initially, GH didn't have any reaction. Moments later, he smiled. He felt so much joy that the frost on his lips melted.

BLY went into the house, and passed GH a hot water bag along the way.

GH put his hands in it, purposed stood close to BLY, raised his eyebrows and asked, "It's so warm! When did you charge it up? How did I not see you doing that?"

"Are you using it? If not, hand it over!" BLY reached out to grab it.

GH blocked him and felt that BLY's hands were colder than his.

"Why are your hands also so cold?" GH put away his smile.

BLY pulled his hands away, and said with an unfriendly tone, "You were standing outside. My dad kept showing me a face of displeasure. How can I dare to stay inside the house?"

GH felt touched yet a little regretful. He used the hot water bag to warm his own hands, and pull BLY's hands in to warm him up too. BLY resisted a little, but GH refused to let go. A pair of big hands wrapped the other. Once in a while, GH even puffed into the bag. Even though it was a little embarrassing, it also had an indescribable sense of warmth.

At night, before sleep, BLY was soaking his legs. GH didn't show up at all. After BLY was done, he went outside to take a look. GH was in the kitchen doing something.

"Uncle, it's been brewing for some time. Is it done?"

"Yes, it is. You can serve it."

GH fill a bowl with ginger soup and carried it carefully outside. Seeing BLY standing at the yard, he couldn't help but complained, "Why are you outside? Come back in quickly! It's so cold there!"

BLY looked at GH's bowl of ginger soup, moved his lips, but didn't say a word.

"Try it. How's the taste?" GH asked.

BLY took two big gulps, "A little hot."

"The hotter it is, the better it is to eliminate the cold. Have some more."

"Aren't you having some?" BLY glanced at GH.

GH was drowned in fondness, and smiled, "I'll drink after you finish yours."

>> GGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! GH ONCE AGAIN MELTED MY HEART. SO SWEET!!!!

More details from the novel & a missing part from the episode:

** GH saw the bruise on BLY's leg. And the novel writes:

His breathing stopped for an instant. Without any explanation, he pulled BLY's leg over, and asked, "How did you get this?"

"You are asking me that? Someone was being an idiot and gave that to me."

GH felt remorseful out of a sudden. He remembered that he didn't use so much force! How did a kick turn out like that? His fingers gently rubbed that area. He was feeling very vexed inside. BLY hurting himself is one thing. GH getting BLY hurt is yet another. The fiery of arrogance that he had in the afternoon was completely extinguished, leaving behind only remorse and concern.

"Does it hurt?" GH asked.

BLY took the chance to strike back, "Of course. Why don't you try getting a knock yourself?"

GH suddenly leaned down, and placed his lips gently on the knocked area. BLY's body tensed up, and immediately pulled GH away.

"Quit fooling around. My dad is outside!"

"I don't care. I'm concerned. I want to kiss no matter what. Otherwise, I won't be able to forgive myself."

"How big a thing is this?" BLY was conflicted with embarrassment and anger, "I was kidding! It doesn't hurt at all. I knock against things all the time. This is nothing. Hurry up and get up!"

GH not only didn't move, but also kissed that area in escalation. Initially, he only used his lips to rub, but later on he even used his tongue.

BLY's face changed, and gave GH a kick.

"Do you feel no shame?"

GH laughed and grabbed BLY's leg, feeling playful and concerned, "I know I am wrong on this issue. I shouldn't treat your buddies like that. But, Yin Zi, I really can't control my emotions. I feel very insecure inside. If you can give me a confirmation, I won't feel so miserable!"

I give a confirmation and I will lose my sense of security. That's what BLY wanted to reply GH with.

On the surface, BLY still pretended to be ignorant.

"What sense of security do you want? Isn't staying here without paying a cent enough? How much more do you want?"

GH grabbed the corner of the blanket forcefully and wrapped himself and BLY under it. Then, he hugged the one beside him tightly, without any slit of a gap in between. He placed his lips against his ears.

"You know what I want."

>> Here, GH tried to get an answer from BLY, but BLY acted like he didn't know what GH was saying. And the novel wrote how BLY actually felt!!! <3<3<3

>> Later on, in Ch. 97, GH got the answer he wanted, after their second passionate jerk-off session, during which BLY became an active player,  kissed and pleasured GH for the first time. That’s one chapter of smut. I’m not going to translate it. I don’t think I can write it in English as well as the author did in Mandarin. >_<

4. Ch. 98:

Spoiler

Missing from the episode

**YM came to look for GH & BLY in the next morning. YM saw GH & BLY sleeping in the same room. During their walk to school, YM revealed the truth behind the mess at GH's dad & BLY's mum wedding, which completely skipped by the series.

>> I skipped the start of the novel and so, I'm also clueless as to what happened in that wedding. But, at least we know that fate brought GH & BLY together even before they knew each other. ^^

Different reaction by BLY in the novel

**While walking their dog, GH & BLY saw BHQ & Aunty Zou at the riverside. GH told BLY to pick a date and get BHQ & Aunty Zou married. BLY asked him why the hurry. GH teased that once they get married, BLY can move to his place and stay with him happily. Here, BLY told Ah Lang, the dog, to bite GH.

>> In the episode, BLY pulled Ah Lang away instead. I like BLY’s reaction in the novel more. It’s more BLY.

5. Ch. 107 & 108: BLY prompting his dad to get married & the wedding

Spoiler

>> These are the same as the episode. The series skipped the part where Aunty Zou's 'husband' came back and caused some troubles, and the part where BHQ went to fetch his wife-to-be from her place.

>> The series brought forward the wedding to this episode, and pushed back the return of GH's brother, Gu Yang. The novel writes that BHQ’s wedding happened one week after Gu Yang went overseas. Anyway, Gu Yang doesn't need to attend the wedding.

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Novel comparisons for Addicted Web Series, Season 1 [Complete]

Episodes:  1  |  2  |  3  |  4  |  5  | 6  |  7  |  8  |  9  |  10  |  11  |  12  |  13  |  14  |  15

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[mym999]

When i watch Kdrams,mostly 2nd male lead loves 1st female lead so much..but still she choses 1st lead...I always feel bad for 2nd lead in most dramas. this series doesnt have much of this sort of things... BLY & GH are almost similar type with different attitudes...both long for love...thats why they are attracted to each other..I wish people translate this novel even though its completed...

[gayyoxx]

@alvinboi

Thank you for the comparison!

Please, please, please translate ch. 97! Pleaseeee *put my best kitten face*

[guhai]

26 minutes ago, alvinboi said:

That’s one chapter of smut. I’m not going to translate it. I don’t think I can write it in English as well as the author did in Mandarin. >_<

Thank you for the translations and comparisons; they were enjoyable as always!

I wish I understood written Mandarin well enough to translate the smut considering I write graphic explicit content quite a bit  Would've been fun.

Edit: If anyone who speaks Mandarin wants to give me a general summary of the smut scene (kind of like what @Leo456 does in their smut summaries), maybe I can try to work it out into something smoothly receivable? I don't, however, want to change CJD's words.

Edit 2: @gayyoxx Perhaps you can visit LovelyThings on Wattpad and ask her to translate it. She does smut translations quite well.

[mym999]

In which part they have mutual first kiss...

[liesl]

The eng sub for episode 13 is now complete on "Chinese Web Series" Youtube channel.

 

By the way, I've read that the uncut DVD is not allowed. Is it true? What would the DVD then be without all the uncut scenes? Isn't that like the major reason for people to buy the DVD?

[lancei]

7 minutes ago, liesl said:

The eng sub for episode 13 is now complete on "Chinese web series" Youtube channel.

 

By the way, I've read that the uncut DVD is not allowed. Is it true? What would the DVD then be without all the uncuts? Isn't that like the major reason for people to buy the DVD?

Hmm, I would hope that the DvD is uncut. Otherwise all their work will be wasted.....It is not like I want the smut or anything..... *roll my Tsundere eyes*

[Baron-B]

After 8 years time skip

[Leo456]

47 minutes ago, guhai said:

Thank you for the translations and comparisons; they were enjoyable as always!

I wish I understood written Mandarin well enough to translate the smut considering I write graphic explicit content quite a bit  Would've been fun.

Edit: If anyone who speaks Mandarin wants to give me a general summary of the smut scene (kind of like what @Leo456 does in their smut summaries), maybe I can try to work it out into something smoothly receivable? I don't, however, want to change CJD's words.

Edit 2: @gayyoxx Perhaps you can visit LovelyThings on Wattpad and ask her to translate it. She does smut translations quite well.

@guhai , I am afraid that I cannot give you the deep detail of smut scene because the source is already summarised into Thai language. Then, I translate Thai into English again. 

However, I am waiting for your artwork  

[radi770]

OMG BLY cute voice when he is talking to his dog  

Now i want a dog XD

(ep 13 18:45)

[gayyoxx]

@Leo456 If you are writing the next summary, can you put links to the previous parts, kind of what alvinboi does with the episodic comparison? That would make it easier for us to find and read your summary.  

[guhai]

16 minutes ago, Leo456 said:

@guhai , I am afraid that I cannot give you the deep detail of smut scene because the source is already summarised into Thai language. Then, I translate Thai into English again. 

However, I am waiting for your artwork  

It's okay! I love your translations regardless of smut detail haha. I'm an author though not an artist 

5 minutes ago, gayyoxx said:

@Leo456 If you are writing the next summary, can you put links to the previous parts, kind of what alvinboi does with the episodic comparison? That would make it easier for us to find and read your summary.  

I think @skeletonworks has them under a spoiler button on the first post.

[ayasdai]

My thoughts on Wei Zhou and Johnny's chemistry. On screen it radiates, I love it, partly that was the reason I fell in love with the series. You can have a great story, but with awful actors you can flush it down the toilet. But when the actors are terrific, their chemistry is amazing and the show is well directed... now that's what I call catharsis, doomsday, earthquake, thunderstorm. I have to add here that when I started watching Counterattack I thought around the second episode: 'oh no no no! It must be the same director who directed Like Love'. Even though they have a good chemistry, the messy screenplay made the show lacking and many times confusing. So kudos to the director of Addicted, he did an excellent job.

Back to Johnny and Wei Zhou, when I watched the BTS videos I could not help but notice that first their relationship was a bit awkward, which is understandable, they didn't know each other beforehand and plus they were going to have intimate scenes together... but then, later comes the breakthrough. They had grown closer together and it is noticeable that their relationship had changed. Seeing the BTS videos I first thought that Johnny is the one who is chasing after Wei Zhou, just like GH in the series, but after watching the interviews and the fan meeting it seems quite the opposite. I didn't know if you noticed but Wei Zhou is searching for Johnny's look many times when he is laughing on something, touching him, sometimes even chasing after him and I can't get enough of his big, sparkling eyes when he smiles/looks at Johnny. Johnny on the other hand seems like he is being lost in his own world, playing the manliest man alive so much that my screen grows muscles too (I mean all kind of muscles). Regardless, he still pays attention to Wei Zhou, but in a silent kind of way. (or well, attacking him)

There are two particular moments I liked during the fan meeting. The first one when Johnny hugs a girl and Wei Zhou has this amazed look on his face, but it is mixing a bit with a 'hey, wtf' look as though it is a bit forced. The second one when Johnny is role playing with a guy from the audience and first Wei Zhou is standing few feet away like an abandoned puppy. Then he goes to help with the cake at the table and it seems he is ignoring and not playing attention at all what's going on the stage. But then I was kind of surprised seeing him react suddenly two more times with an even more intense 'wtf' face while Johnny is joking around with the guy. I think you can tell if someone's facial expression is genuine or fake and there I didn't see Wei Zhou the actor (or maybe I'm seeing too much into it). And then the best part, when the guy touches Johnny and as soon as Wei Zhou sees it he runs over and separates them, wtf are you doing man, and pulls closer Johnny to himself then send the guy away, haha. Priceless.

Maybe it was just for the show, I don't know, but it didn't seem staged to me at all. If you watch the whole fan meeting you see that there is nearly no fan service, not like during Like Love or Counterattack fan meetings (where I sometimes found it too obvious that they staged it), that's why these two moments caught my attention. And I liked the meeting more without heavy fan service, it looked more natural.

[thoron]

3 hours ago, guhai said:

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"Guhai could never get used to this—never wanted to get used to this. These weekend mornings where he would wake up to Luoyin’s adorable habit of grabbing onto his sleeve in his sleep—as if looking for an anchor that would guide him back to the real world after being swept away by waves of dreams. Guhai loved being his anchor."

(I like to imagine this is why Luoyin does it, hah.)
(Note, this is not a translation of CJD's novel. It's something I wrote for Luoyin Hates Cars - my new fanfic on AFF. The corresponding chapter hasn't been published yet.)

 

Confession : I have never read your fanfic @guhai. The reason being I'm super addicted to the original series,  i want to read the original novel in English first. And to get in another addiction is like introducing me to yet another drug. Im already an addict, now you want me to be alcoholic too? Hehe

But if your quote above is any indication, then i must say it is one helluva great read. Am very much willing to try it out. I bet everyone should. To keep us sane in the coming weeks when the long absence of the series will be felt. 

 

Speaking of translations,  @alvinboi your novel comparisons are such a treat! Never doubt yourself,  I would definitely read a translation from you. In fact, if ever you decide to do it, keep your annotations (the words in green), include them in the final product.  theyre so much fun. I imagine your translation would be filled with inserts like 

" Gaaah This is soo cute. I'm gonna die."

Imagine that. It will be like reading it with a friend. 

Also, why no novel comparison from episode 1 to 4?

 

[samscheetah]

http://v.qq.com/page/z/n/v/z0185sjynnv.html?__t=1&ptag=1.sina&_out=1

English sub need Alert!!

 

[Pak Honai]

am i the only one who waiting for 15th episode with engsub '-'?

[mym999]

6 minutes ago, Pak Honai said:

am i the only one who waiting for 15th episode with engsub '-'?

Im waiting too...for eng sub

[Guest skeletonworks]

6 hours ago, guhai said:

A new fanfic based on my take on how the car accident impacted Luoyin and his marriage. Delves into why Guhai constantly fears losing Luoyin, even after marrying him:

Luoyin Hates Cars : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1093297/luoyin-hates-cars-addicted

Excerpt:

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He wished he could say it ‘wasn’t personal,’ but it was actually too personal. Eleven years had passed since the accident. In that time, he had gotten married to the last person he thought he’d ever marry: his step-brother. His husband owned a company and Luoyin found himself content to work alongside him, not caring whether or not he was ‘top dog’—their relationship was long past that stage. On their off days, they spent time at home, cooking, cleaning, and walking ALang. Occasionally they went on vacation. And, of course, there was the sex, which had greatly improved over the years.

 

He was happy…except for the cars.

 

 

 

 

 

I haven't read this latest fanfic first yet. I don't know whether you've read the spoiler about the accident but here I will add more to the previous spoiler and I was devastated when I heard it from my friend today... 

When Guhai covered Luoyin during the accident, something proded the back of Guhai's body!!! Luoyin tried frantically to take out the object. In the process, this had left marks/scars on his hands. After that he carried Guhai on his back while crying to search for nearby hospital because at that time the road was congested and there's no way an ambulance can get to the accident area. He carried him for God knows how far and was scared of losing him. Guhai only discovered about this incident 8 years later when Yangmeng (who now works as a police traffic) showed to him the CCTV. That's when he decided to get married to the man he loves so dearly. 

My thoughts: When I heard about this, I almost got teary eyes. It's very heart wrenching. I don't know if I can watch this scene or not when it airs in season 2 or 3 T___T This is heartbreaking....

[lancei]

4 minutes ago, skeletonworks said:

 

I haven't read this latest fanfic first yet. I don't know whether you've read the spoiler about the accident but here I will add more to the previous spoiler and I was devastated when I heard it from my friend today... 

 

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It seems like the series get a lot darker/dramatic in the later part. I don't know if my heart can handle such strong dose xD Now I am even more interested in reading the novel. CJD senpai, pleaseeeeeeeeee

[Lukasz D]

8 minutes ago, lancei said:

It seems like the series get a lot darker/dramatic in the later part. I don't know if my heart can handle such strong dose xD Now I am even more interested in reading the novel. CJD senpai, pleaseeeeeeeeee

 

Dont worry it will prolly be cut xD

/sarcasm