Guest yerathy Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 Take a listen. CCs are all welcome!Actually, it is not like a live performance thing. It's just live because I cut and paste clips together. I just sang one whole clip! I just added the background to it. So it's kinda like live right? Anywho. I messed up the lyrics at the end so i cut that out... >< ALL Comments and Critism are welcome. Throw it at me! THANK YOU. I really appreciate it! I just want to improve. JRG SOUNDCLICK (or click in my signature ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ~S2~ Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 i luv this song. and i'm a bijou fan too^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest lovablekrnstar63 Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 make sure you open your vowels when you sing. makes it sound much better if you do. it sounds a little off pitch but i think its just me keke.. it sounds really nice though i really like your tone great job overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xx0_gigi Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 i like your voice but i dont' like the live effect sorry peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yerathy Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 Actually, I didn't put any effects into this song. Just backgrounds. Thanks you guys. I will open my vowels? I think I know what you mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mime_star Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 OMG!!! this is out of tune >< Good vocals though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tinasarangg Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 hm, you're inconsistant, at times you were a bit too flat and others you were a bit too sharp. the high notes weren't fully reached. hehe i think when they mean open your vowels, they mean like open you're mouth and pronunciate more cos sometimes it sounds like you're mumbling :sweat: i like your voice. you're timing was well =) practice a bit more and you'd sound awesome. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
songielove Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 hi yer!~ so glad to hear you solo again!!!~ hehe.~ to be honest, i wasn't so 'wow' when i heard this original song hehe.~ but lets get to your version--> Sounds nice~ i think you should control the higher notes more so that it comes out stronger.~Sing more full . It doesn't sound that out of tune; maybe you were j/ throwing in some uniqueness/differences to your version hehe.~ but since i wan't that big of a fan for this song, i don't really know how each part was supposed to go exactly *shrug*~ hehe, but who cares~ cute cute!~ btw: did you use my mic for this??~ if you did, sounds like it sounds better than when i use it...~ not as much static haha.~ *awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest flycmagurl Posted November 12, 2005 Share Posted November 12, 2005 it was good to listen too...some flats here and there but that was okay. Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest `Nivek Posted November 12, 2005 Share Posted November 12, 2005 I've never heard the english version of this song before. You did a pretty nice job on it. But some cc's : You tend to go a out of tune sometimes, and occasionally it seems like you're out of breath. Just practice a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jlove1831 Posted November 12, 2005 Share Posted November 12, 2005 ^ I agree. Some parts sound a bit nasaly, but it overall sounds pretty good. Btw, I accidentally voted "flop" for one of your songs when I wasn't paying attention to my mouse O_O Sorry!! >_<; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dori dori Posted November 12, 2005 Share Posted November 12, 2005 ya u just needa practice more, u`ll do good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yerathy Posted November 13, 2005 Share Posted November 13, 2005 Thank you you guys!! I have something to ask though... I don't know when I am going flat or not? Can someone tell me what that is? Thank you for every little advice and such that was given. I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritzy! Posted November 13, 2005 Share Posted November 13, 2005 ^ yeah you did go flat but at points you were going sharp too! lol that's so awesome. i wish i can go sharp lolo sry that was bad advice.. Um flat is when you go lower than you're suppose to. =) I don't know how to put this into words but it sounds like you're whining.. Ahh i don't know. whatever :x Sry. but see, i did answer your question Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yerathy Posted November 14, 2005 Share Posted November 14, 2005 ^ Really? Like whining.. LOL. I get it now... Thank you for that. I will practice more and more! HAHA.. thanku Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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