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하루 하루 ( Haru Haru ) Cover <3

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elain

agreed! :] except for the makeup work to come DDDD:

and my mom's like making me do SATs -o-

ROFLMAO! same with my mom! she's like *MUSTWATCHHURRICANENEWS*

:] all the boys there are so cute <3333

like japanese people are weird... i think that's why i like them so much o___o

OMG I LOVED ONE LITRE OF TEARS ! RYOCHAN <33333

haha that's how we do ;3

orichan

'CAUSE THE ALBUM WAS ROCKIN!

and TOP is like soooo hawt in haru haru *___*

ROFLROFLROFL *IS BIG BANG FANATIC* ;3333

:] thanks babeh ~ x___x still workin on tasha.

she's insanely good, like omg DDD:

i have a recording of the intro!

(and first verse, but i deleted it 'cause it sounds like i'm reading D:)

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God, finally.

JUST KIDDING <33

I'll be back to listen to this Jooty Haru Haru seckshiness on Friday.

I swear we need to collab once on something more singing-oriented so you can show off your singing voice ;]

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ohemgee. tons of makeup work. >_<

& we're definitely going to have to make up for the 6 days we missed. Blah.

I hope they don't take it off of our thanksgiving break or winter break. >_<

That'll be so freaking gay. I need one whole week of thanksgiving & two whole weeks of winter !

I think my mom thinks the hurricane is going to like turn around & hit us again or something. LOL.

She freaking vacumned the floor AGAIN. I was like ... mom didn't you just vacumn it yesterday ?

And she's like DUST COLLECTS VERY VERY FAST ... -__________-

HAHAHA. They're pretty weird, but yeah. Ohohoh 'Code Blue'! It's a medical drama. <3 YAMAPI !

ONE LITER OF TEARS ! RYO RYO RYO. <3 I freaking love him !

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susana

LOL ! ILU <3

I WANT MY LONG COMMENT NAO T___T

and i'd totally be honored to do a singing-oriented collab

(if i was a better singer DDD:)

orichan

i still have the intro ;3

it's sekshi ~ but ... yeah, not hard D:

I WILL HAVE IT DONE THIS WEEK!

(if my mom goes to work .__.)

elain

SERIOUSLY! OMG DDDD:

... i hope we don't. i need those miniscule days off

in like april and october and february!

they already took off enough holidays for the elongated summer

THAT I REALLY DON'T NEEED ! >_____<

i'd rather have those breaks from school that an extra two weeks for summer.

HAHA! same here xDDDDD ~

wow, my mom's moved on to her chinese dramas x___x

like not the interesting ones, those old people dramas back in communist days -o-

OMG I LOVE RYO AND PICHAN! CODE BLUE NEEDS TO UPDATE FASTER DDDD:

I'M LIKE DYING FOR EPISODE 10 SQUEEEE ~

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I like soo soo much your energy! You sing with a lot of energy! and your perfect english sounds great *-*

and you have a great korean pronunciation!

I LOVE YOUR TEMPO PARTS!!! *-*!

You're a really T.O.P girl! XD

In some parts you lost the tone, it's only a comment but when you sing with energy you have to take care with the balance between singing and screaming (or in this case rapping), cause if you make with A LOOOOT of energy probably you will lost the tone, you have to control your voice, not your voice controls you! xDDDD

But in general i like it =)

Big Bang Girls on top ya'!!

<33333333

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You're so GOOD! I'm so IMPRESSED!

I wished I can rap like you! (p.s. tries so many times, but I keep skipping words...LOL^^) It takes so much energy to rap & sing at the same time...

I love your rapping parts, but when it comes to the singing parts, I think you were kinda out of energy so it sounded kinda weird...

Otherwise, I'm still in love with your Haru Haru Cover though!

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Wow. I left this super long comment ... and it got deleted.

Basically, I said I DON'T LIKE THEM TAKING BREAKS AWAY FROM SUMMER.

I'd rather them take those mini-breaks away from us ... or just one or two days from thanksgiving & winter.

BUT NOT SPRING BREAK. Hahah.

& those old dramas ... I wanna strangle the people in there. LOL. o_o

My momma's still watching the news ... how gay. I wanna watch my shows. <3

& I only watched Episode 1 of Code Blue because I want to wait for it to finish airing and then watch it all together.

It's more exciting to watch Yamapi that way. ;D<3

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I never got to reply back to your cc for the This Love collab thing, but thank you!

And so in repayment, I guess I'll cc you haha

I love the energy you put into it - like I lose breath a lot and my voice is airy, so I can definitely tell that your rapping is pretty good :)

The flow and the pronounciation kind of threw me off though at parts. At the ending of sentences, it kind of floated out instead of punctuating...if that kind of makes sense. And some of the words kind of had abrupt stops when it was supposed to flow a little more.

And also, sometimes the pitch was off for some parts (a little bit of the beginning of TOP's rap before the first chorus).

But yes, these are just things to help you improve - other than that, you're an awesome rapper :)

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Tuai

T__T yeah i had a tad TOO MUCH energy.

but i mean, when i do this song, i can't really help it D:

IT GETS ME SO PUMPED YAKNOW *___*

(yeah, bad excuse, but still! xDDDD like i can't help but give a little more OOMPH than necessary)

ROFL TOP GIRL ;3333 omg, i think i've covered all his stuff by now x__x

it's insane how many collabs with TOP i've done o___o LOL

thanks dearie :] BIG BANG + 1TYM + YG POWA <3

Ca_Kristine_4ever

really?! thanks xDDDD it's def not one of my best though D:

i totally agree! the singing totally drains me emotionally >___<

sings... fails... sings again with less emotion... fails some more D:

HAHA i just noticed that! xD like MAJORRR difference.

i think it's 'cause i was sort of scared of being out of tune

(since taeyang is an effin BEAST *___*)

that i sort of went WOOOOO~ downhill x____________x

:] thanks for the love and support <33333

elain

omg, i hate it when soompi does that DDD<

WHY?! OMG I'D RATHER THEY TAKE AWAY A WEEK FROM SUMMER!

i need that one - two day of rest every month, or i'd die from overwork D:

like if they take away that one day in april,

WE HAVE NO BREAKS IN APRIL! OH NOZ!

i know right! they have such bad fashion taste back then o__o

i wonder if 50 years from now, my kid'll be like 'WTF WERE YOU WEARING MOM?!' xD

YOU SHOULD WATCH IT! it's sorta like... a wacked up version of House oO sort of...

but PI CHAN IS SO HAWT IN ITT ~ GAHHH <33333

fortheSEUNGRI (omg, it's so long. i talk to much -___-;;)

sankyuus <3 haha xD

i'm not really used to pop rap D: haven't done it in a while ~

you can sort of tell my mcsniper/noblesse-ness in this >__<

like i put way too much emphasis on stuff that doesn't need it.

the more i listen, the more i notice that T___T

will def work on it cuz big bang pwns <3333

omg yes, i was wondering when someone would bring up the flow part.

it's a really bad habit that i need to like stop... now. kudos for catching it.

so far, no one's even mentioned that at all for any of my covers.

but i'll change that one fosho. it bothers me so much .___.

and yeah, my pronunciation goes off when i put more OOMPH.

something i also need to take note of >___<

... the pitch was soo much worse with taeyang.

like i cringe when i heard it, i think 'cause of my weak tone + the flatness D:

(although the TOP was out too, i hoped no one would notice.

but i guess haru haru is too popular for no one to notice ;3)

THANKS FOR THE CRITIQUE! <3 i need more of those xD

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the one thing I have to say is to work on intonation

as soon as the song started, you got really pitchy, especially at the end of phrases.

Relisten a bunch of times and pinpoint the parts where you're out of tune and work on that.

also in the chorus, be careful not to overdo it. it sounds like you're straining too much in several parts, especially in the chorus.

and I know GD pronounces a lot of his "r"s as "d"s, but the "HADU HADU" in the choruses... was too much. It just sounded really weird.

sorry for the bluntness but I know you like blunt comments

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it was good

but i agree with nazomiii

you put a lot of force on a lot parts when you dont need to

and when y ousing...y ousound a bit like sunye :D

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hope

yeah, DD: it wasn't that notice-able when i was recording.

i can't believe i didn't fix it x____x

as for the straining, i tried to do that on purpose D:

since i'm suppose to be hurting right?

but maybe i went a bit overboard with that :T

ROFL. did it sound like hadu?

i didn't even notice that xDDDD

i just put lots of stress on my 'r's so it just sounds like shiz -o-

blunt comments ftw <3 thanks for critiquing :]

DOLLYbeans

yeah, >___< i should fix that.

i have a really hard time with these casual raps D:

really?! xDDDDDD omg sunye is like so pro *___*

thanks for the comment <3

bingbongboo

T___T i thought the only rapping part that was out of tune was the TOP D:

yeah, i can't sing worth shizz >___< WILL DEF IMPROVE THAT ! :]

thanks for the comment <3

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hi jz. ^^ i haven't listened to your works for a loonnggg time. :)

i hope you didn't forget me. i had another user 'photodaisy' but i lost the pw (totally not smart...yawp).

xD and i was the one that requested the hg eugene and miryo song 'i don't know.'

when is that going to happen, hmm?!?! jk. xD take your time.

butttt, i actually listened to this. i haven't really been big bang-ing for a long time now and listened to this song probably two or three times.

gotta say, i really do like your chorus though. i have to say, i prefer the singing over the rapping.

for a second, i was like, 'is this jz singing? idk.' and then i check and it is. hahaha.

awesome stuffs. ^^ meehehehehe.

wellz, i hope to hear more from you soon. ^^ and maybe we can collab together. *o*;;; though no one else is auditioning for taec's part on only you...they're like...all intimidated by you. ToT;;; lololol. no fear no fear. :) see you arrounnddzz.

-lulu

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lulu

shame on you! you should listen and help me improveee ~

:] of course i didn't forget you!

it's going to happen whenever yiyang records -o-

that kid is WAYY too studious x____x

i'm doing my part tomorrow, go bother him for his ;333

ONLY TWO OR THREE TIMES T____T but it's sooo good D:

YAY! i love the chorus too <3

trust me, the singing sounds terrible by itself. D: i'm so nasally *dies*

fosho ~ i'm doing so much recording these days since i have time ;3

:] YAYYY MORE COLLABS FTW! ~

omg. only you is so hawt, i can't wait for the casting <3

>___< i'm sorry? i swear i just love taek and wooyoung too much *___*

ttyl babe <3 you're never on msn D;

lipslikepearl

thanks for the support and the comment <3 :]

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Ahhhhh lovelily done as expecteddddd <3

meeeeeeeeek i just got electricity back! so happy! >~<

I guess it didn't affect you muchhhhh... I felt like a pilgrim, living on candlesss T^T

you MUST record HEAVEN as well!! XD

Well, no school till monday... @_@

what to do... hw? nahhhh~!!

practice rapping... yayayayayayay :]

I'm gonna go pratice rapping and try to be just like the cool awesome rapper you areeeeee <3

beware!!! mhehehe xD jk

your one & only

-wonnie

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Wooot <3 this is great...

Your are sooo good at rapping *___* I can't rap properly for live xD~

You know what? .. I think the Intro sounds suuper sexy xD

Just a few things...

It happens that you are a bit off sometimes... especially when a line ends...

But I know this song must be suuper hard.. because it's kinda rapping & singing at the same time....

the rap has a kind of melody... so it's not just plain rapping... xD

I can't even rap properly so I'm still suuper amazed =D

If the chorus was a bit "stronger" it would have been perfect <333

that's all =D

love this <3

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OHMYFOODDDDDDDDD~

ive miss hearing your sexy rapping voice JOOTYYYY~

<3

thank goodness i actually came on soompi today xD

ive been so busy too..*strangles school*

x_x

this version is so different!!!

its got the JZ style to it *rocks head*

<3

*sends Ali love*

xx

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