Fools In Love

[Nirvana]

From a pov of someone who's never been in love.

My friend wrote the bolded 3 lines while I wrote the rest. No offense to anyone it's just for some fun.

Don't over estimate my self-control.

When you hurt it pains me all the way down to my soul.

If you let me go, I promise I won't be okay.

Don't delay.

Don't sway.

Please say.

You need me too.

Please do love me too.

How could you...

Make a fool out of me.

How could you...

stop being a fool...

And use me as a tool.

How cruel.

I love you fool.

Look at me..

I'm sitting here..

With fear

That you will leave me.

Why do I need you so much.

When you hurt me so much.

When I lose your touch.

I felt so crushed.

Dust.

Dust.

You crushed our trust into dust.

His point of view.

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SHUT UP!

And Stop!

You are so greedy.

You said you need me.

You said you love me.

You

richard simmons

. You h*e.

You stole my heart.

Now you wanted to part,

Because of that retard.

You are so greedy.

You said you need me,

But then you cheats me.

You went to him and pleads...

Please.

Please be with me.

While i'm here feeling so please.

I even gave you these...

Diamond necklace.

Diamond bracelet.

Love so ageless

But your greediness

Made it all worthless.

[heejintruong]

SAVEEE <3333

EDIT LATER!

Haha unni your writings are so good <3

sounds like a bit of someone i know at my school.

roar.

the second part of course!

anyways, buh bye now ^^

[Guest chocopocky]

I don't know why but the last poem made me remember a song called "F.U.R.B" by Frankee.

[Guest imready]

its not funny.

i dont really get it.

[Nirvana]

well....... sorry about that if you don't get it.

[Guest clear_blue_rain]

hmm this is quite interesting

[Guest sushigirl.]

Someone explain to me the humor in this.

[Guest f2ts]

wow! this is really good and creative~ i'm touched! keep up the great job!!!

[Guest lovely_16]

hey..tha's a nice poem u got there..it's true...to sum pplz...

[Guest aznshorty]

i like it!!it's really good!!^^

but, i don't get the humor in it. is it supposed to be funny?

i only see it as a emotinal poem.

[Nirvana]

It might be funny to some people and it might be emotional to some people. But i thought it was funny because i've never been in love yet with the people around me going through it. I don't understand how it feel so i just write it the way i see it. And the way i see it, is humorous on love.

Some of you don't get it , it's probably because you never been through it before or never witness it with the people around you.

[spark.]

AH! Linh! I see humor! He called her a richard simmons, a h*e! It's sooo truee! So it's funny. Hahaha, greedy people. xb