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Big Bang's "lies" - English Version Written By Annyon - Full Version!

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This is NOT BB's english version of Lies, it is MY OWN version!
ONCE AGAIN THIS IS NOT BIG BANG'S ENGLISH VERSION OF LIES! It is MY OWN version that I wrote!

I FINISHED THE SONG YAY! Listen and comment, please

Big Bang's official "English" version of their hit song, "Lies", never really got to me like their original Korean version. Perhaps it was because I couldn't connect to the lyrics; the lyrics GD wrote I did not feel suite the song like in the translation of the korean version and because they only sung like half of the song in English. And so I decided to wrote my own version of how I feel this song should go... Well to be honest, I'm not exactly happy of how it turned out, but the rap right before the chorus and the chorus itself are the parts that I like best out of this clip.

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I took some of the translation of the original korean song and placed it into the beginning rap after the opening, but everything else afterwards was all original. Also, all harmonies and background voices by me... You might hear a TINY bit of Big Bang in the back, but I can't help it since they don't have an original instrumental... This recording was done using the NoRaeCut fan-made instrumental of the song, by the way. =]

Lyrics

Do not take/redistribute/record without my permission!

Yeah!

(Love is pain)

Dedicated to my broken-hearted people

One's old a flame

(Yeah)

Just scream my name

(Damn)

And I'm so sick of love song (song)

Yeah, I hate damn love song (song)

Momento of ours

Gojimar!

The nights late and rain has just started to come down

I curse you back into my memories and now

No more options are left for me to go

I told myself I didn't need your bull and so

More hatred submerges my flow

So tightly my handgun chooses to blow

It's bull; no person has hurt me like you

And so forget about the hurtful past (Got cheated, ya)

No happiness can be found in within my heart

Got me crying softly in the rain

Got me hurting like a sharp pain

Yeah you got me, you bat me

Even then it wasn't enough for you to hurt me

You always hated me, You always wanted me

More or so you knew, I'll be right there

I'm so sorry but I love you like a damn fool

Even if you lied to me there's always forgiveness

I'm so sorry but I love you more than ever

Hand me your cruel and bloody heart

Now tear apart our memories

I'm so sorry but I love you like a damn fool

I'm so sorry (I'm sorry)

But I love you (I love you more, more)

I'm so sorry but I love you not like your lies

Tone down my empty broken heart

Now give me what I really want

Dedicate this song to you cause I know you feel there ain't no way (no way)

(No ones gonna know this song's meaning)

By myself, alone I'll be the one who knows this song's heart

Couldn't ever hold on more to gold and name

Holler over, get yourself cover

Found a letter, ain't made me feel better

Our breakup notice darkened my solace

So tell me what should I do to forget?

(More than ever, I cannot just let you go)

No, that's just cheating; since I'm clinging, you 'outta feel guilty

I'm so sorry but I love you like a damn fool

Even if you lied to me there's always forgiveness

I'm so sorry but I love you more than ever

Hand me your cruel and bloody heart

Now tear apart our memories

I'm so sorry but I love you like a damn fool

I'm so sorry (I'm sorry)

But I love you (I love you more, more)

I'm so sorry but I love you not like your lies

Tone down my empty broken heart

Now give me what I really want

You said we could make it

But it was just another lie you sold

(DROP THAT BIT)

I can't forget you, my baby

Even after all your those lies you're still a part of me yeah

I hope the scars that I gave you when we split will have healed

I'm am so sorry I didn't give you much more hey

I'm so sorry but I love you like a damn fool

Even if you lied to me there's always forgiveness

I'm so sorry but I love you more than ever

Hand me your cruel and bloody heart

Now tear apart our memories

I'm so sorry but I love you like a damn fool

I'm so sorry (I'm sorry)

But I love you (I love you more, more)

I'm so sorry but I love you not like your lies

Tone down my empty broken heart

Now give me what I really want

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Comments & Critiques welcomed! :lol:

- Annyon

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The chorus was :w00t: ...!!.. OMG.

Annyon!! you are soooo goood!! *lyrics :tears: *

I esp like these parts:

"I'm so sorry but I love you like a damn fool, Even if you lied to me there's always forgiveness" and

"I'm so sorry but I love you not like your lies".. the words and the strong flow you had. ^_^

My gosh, i have no rapping skills whatsoever, so i can't really give you any C/Cs on that. :sweatingbullets:

It just sounded straight-forward awesome altogether. And nice mixing. =)

I extremely... extremely love the chorus..~ the words are so touching.. *gah...*

Nice job Annyon!!^^ You have to finish this song... :blush: Keep it up!! =DD

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LOL You're like a stalker! Everytime I post something with original lyrics, you're like the first or one of the first to post, ahahaha! <3

But yeah thank you... I love the chorus too! It's freaking awesome. :lol:

I do hope I finish this song too... It took me forever to write the lyrics though... ~_~

Like I was putting all of my frustration and forgiveness into the song, you know?

I wanted to get the feelings and mood of the song right. xD

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LOL You're like a stalker! Everytime I post something with original lyrics, you're like the first or one of the first to post, ahahaha! <3

But yeah thank you... I love the chorus too! It's freaking awesome. :lol:

I do hope I finish this song too... It took me forever to write the lyrics though... ~_~

Like I was putting all of my frustration and forgiveness into the song, you know?

I wanted to get the feelings and mood of the song right. xD

:lol: Uhm... i'll try not to do that then..?? :ph34r:

It's just gooood timing!! :D :D

Anyhow.. i edited my post after hearing it for the 2nd time..

Very touching..^^

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^ Haha there must be something... Like the awful rapping I did(?). xD

@songielove: Haha thanks! At least I know one person likes to stalk listen to me. :lol:

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OMYGAWSH.

i really liked your version of this song!

sorry, i can't really critique on anything since i don't know any technical stuff. But it sounded fine (=

well done :)

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one word: CUTE! I absolutely liked your rapping! Although I'm not nearly a professional on this, I'd say I really liked your recording! It didn't sound awkward (like randomly singing the english translation of the song).. NICE JOB!

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OMYGAWSH.

i really liked your version of this song!

sorry, i can't really critique on anything since i don't know any technical stuff. But it sounded fine (=

well done :)

Hehe thanks! =]

one word: CUTE! I absolutely liked your rapping! Although I'm not nearly a professional on this, I'd say I really liked your recording! It didn't sound awkward (like randomly singing the english translation of the song).. NICE JOB!

Really? That's good, I didn't want it to sound awkward. =p

can i collab with u and do up TOP's part?

Sure, once I finish writing the lyrics(?). lol

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WAHH!!..another good english version of a korean song..i relli like it..u are relli good at this..and u sing it relli good too..

gah i wish i can mix good to be able to put clips here...>.<

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haha. i love how you rap (:

i was feeling it too.

good job ! finish the song soon (:

Thanks! Although, I hate my rap... I sound horrible. xD

WAHH!!..another good english version of a korean song..i relli like it..u are relli good at this..and u sing it relli good too..

gah i wish i can mix good to be able to put clips here...>.<

Hehe really, it's a good version? >_O

Thanks for your comments. ^^;

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