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She's a bad girl, I know, but here I go again. oh no

funnybear1funnybear1 Posts: 144Member
edited April 2012 in love & relationships
hey soompi lovers! i want to thank you all from the bottom of my broken heart for all the advice :wub: . what i'm about to post might sound bad to some of you that has been following my on going love story, but i don't think it's that bad. hehe. i was pretty heart broken for the past couple of days after i found out that she is a bad girl smoking and calling me a loser but i still want to try one more time but i'm scared that i might be arrested when class is over lolanyways i made a thread previously about having another upcoming poem recital. it's 2mr!! so i wrote two poems. now this next part might sound creepy but i wrote one of the poems while standing in front of her house :phew:

do you guys think i should recite this poem?

here's the poem

title : undecided yet still thinking of a good title

again and again and again and again
again and again and again and again
why am I standing like this in front of your house again, am I a fool
Getting tricked again and again, and suffering again and again
But why am I at this place again
I think I've gone crazy, have I no pride
I come back to you, like the first time around
Saying 'I can't be like this (like this, like this)',
I'm being like this again today, no
again and again and again and again
I keep going back to you. I don't know why, I don't know why
again and again and again and again
I fall for your words again. I don't know why, I don't know why
why do I seem like such a fool
Why did I become like this
I made a firm decision, again and again
Why do I keep coming back to you
 I think I've gone crazy, have I no pride
I come back to you, like the first time around
Saying 'I won't ever see you again (see you, see you)',
I'm being like this again
again and again and again and again
I keep going back to you. I don't know why, I don't know why
again and again and again and again
I fall for your words again. I don't know why, I don't know why
what kind of medicine are you, that I can't give it up
Even without me knowing, I keep yearning for you, and eventually look for you again
Though I know you're a bad girl, I embrace you and love you again
Undoubtedly, clearly, I want to come towards you
Knowing all the pains of tomorrow, I can't turn around, I can't decide
darn it, why am I like this, why am I lying next to this girl
How many more times do I have to do this for me to come to my senses
Someone, tie me down somewhere, quickly, please
She's a bad girl, I know (I know), but here I go again. oh no
again and again and again and again
I keep going back to you. (I'm going back to you) I don't know why, I don't know why
again and again and again and again (I keep coming back)
I fall for your words again. (even I) I don't know why, I don't know why
oh, oh, yeah



what do you think about this poem? would it be too creepy?

here's the other one i wrote right before the dawn yesterday hehe so i titled it before the dawn

title: before the dawn
Because I listen to my heart beat one by one
Because I listen to my heart
heart heart to to my heart heart
If I can’t get you no matter how hard I try
You aren’t the one, i feel like a beggar
I-I, can’t let you go like this, its suffocating
And I don’t know what to do
Why Why … Why Why … Why Why … Before the dawn.. Before the dawn..
My heart isn’t obsessed
Before the dawn.. Before the dawn..
I want to capture you no matter what

Those two lips that whispered love
Those two eyes that close at the right chance
The sides fly to me heart,
I’ll be there by you side (huh)

I became used to only looking at you
Lingering around you, I feel like a beggar
I want to let go of everything now, and thats suffocating
And I don’t know what to do

Why Why … Why Why … Why Why

Before the dawn.. Before the dawn..
My heart isn’t obsessed
Before the dawn.. Before the dawn..
I want to capture you no matter what

Without knowing, I step on your shadow
I’m probably gradually getting crazier
(Because I listen to my heart beat one by one)
To my eyes that sees everything to be dark,
You’re the only one that shines brightly
(Because I listen to my heart heart heart)

Before the dawn (ye ye ye)
Before the dawn (ye ye ye)
I’ll stop you before its too late
Before the dawn (ye ye ye)
Before the dawn (ye ye ye)

I want to have you in the end no matter what

(Before the dawn)
close your eye and close your mind,
your road thats covered with veils
I want to protect you from a future
that seems to be captured in secrets
Because its, you must love me
(Before the dawn)
I’ll hold on tightly so you can’t leave
I’ll grab onto you so I won’t have to cry
No matter how many times you throw me away,
Or how much you prevent it, I’m never going to let you go


or should i do this poem ^^^ instead? this will be my last try. idc about my grade no more it's all or nothing here!

previous thread related to this topic
http://www.soompi.com/forums/topic/377151-confused-and-heartbroken
http://www.soompi.com/forums/topic/377084-the-girl-i-like-got-me-arrested/
http://www.soompi.com/forums/topic/376832-would-this-be-a-good-confession-poem-for-a-girl/

Replies

  • _siku__siku_ (>^.^)> ang ang~ Posts: 1,455Member

    IDOL

    You know, this is getting boring. 
  • LoliTzAlLoliTzAl somewherePosts: 91Member

    ROOKIE

    You know what sucks about life? Every mistake you make will haunt you forever.

    If she really gets defensive after your second poem and get your bottom arrested, It will be a stain in your criminal records, In law's Eye you will be considered not a normal human being but a pervert or someone with problems which can lead into drastic measurements being kicked off school, sent into psychiatrics humiliation not only yourself but your whole family, You are about to bring down your whole family down with you. Media will want a to hear about this unusual news, Television/Radio will talk about your idiotic move. Women that has suffered this kind of treaments might start some Facebook movement to get your bottom in jail and label you as a rapist, pervert and other names..

    For your family and own sake PLEASE just let it go. She aint the only half orange/lemon fish in the world, THERE IS SOMEONE SOMEWHERE AROUND IN THE WORLD THAT IS GOING TO MARRY YOU SOMEDAY, Why screw up your chances and destroying your life with this girl?
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  • funnybear1funnybear1 Posts: 144Member
    edited April 2012
    _siku_ wrote on 15 April 2012 - 07:28 PM:

    You know, this is getting boring. 

    sorry....you made me sad with your comment and the thumbs up it got :tears:......-_- i just wanted some good advice on my situation....

    LoliTzAl wrote on 15 April 2012 - 08:35 PM:

    You know what sucks about life? Every mistake you make will haunt you forever.

    If she really gets defensive after your second poem and get your bottom arrested, It will be a stain in your criminal records, In law's Eye you will be considered not a normal human being but a pervert or someone with problems which can lead into drastic measurements being kicked off school, sent into psychiatrics humiliation not only yourself but your whole family, You are about to bring down your whole family down with you. Media will want a to hear about this unusual news, Television/Radio will talk about your idiotic move. Women that has suffered this kind of treaments might start some Facebook movement to get your bottom in jail and label you as a rapist, pervert and other names..

    For your family and own sake PLEASE just let it go. She aint the only half orange/lemon fish in the world, THERE IS SOMEONE SOMEWHERE AROUND IN THE WORLD THAT IS GOING TO MARRY YOU SOMEDAY, Why screw up your chances and destroying your life with this girl?

    yeah...i think i will be in jail for a while if she calls the cops on me again. i was warned the first time. i guess i will just write up a quick poem between now and class! thanks :P
  • choellechoelle Posts: 212Member
    So you don't really care that she hates you / will hate you even more? If you're actually being serious, that is.
    Please have some rationality.

  • funnybear1funnybear1 Posts: 144Member
    edited April 2012
    choelle wrote on 16 April 2012 - 12:09 AM:

    So you don't really care that she hates you / will hate you even more? If you're actually being serious, that is.
    Please have some rationality.


    well i actually just had a change of heart (about an hour ago). i couldn't careless about that hoe now. going to recite a new poem about my future success in life and probably hint to everyone about her smoking on school ground so she can get expelled. :lol:
  • BingBong_514BingBong_514 Posts: 284Member
    Aren't you breaching copyright laws for posting 2PM's Again and Again lyrics without recognition of the source?

    But then again, aren't we all breaching copyright laws...? One way or another...? <_<
  • JooleaJoolea Posts: 134Member
    edited April 2012
    I think I smell a troll.

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    Actually, I can't even tell if this dude is serious or not... wacko.gif
  • judiijudii Posts: 498Member
    TROLL IN THE DUNGEON
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  • itrayyaitrayya latchkey princess. California.Posts: 7,221Friend of Soompi

    IDOL

    you wanted advice, soompiers are giving you advices.
    you should consider yourself lucky because some of these advices have been honest and caring.
    it is you who decided to over look them and not consider why and what is being said.

    and you've said it correctly, 'oh no.'.
    maybe you don't like the girl, maybe you like the idea of chasing a girl and then having her fall in love with you.
    maybe you're a bit out of touch with reality. sometimes you win some, sometimes you lose some.

    i'm sorry but this is becoming unhealthy and a little bit dangerous for you and for her.
    DO YOU UNDERSTAND THAT SHE MIGHT BE SCARED FOR HER SAFETY?

    just because she didn't end up liking you, you don't have to call her a hoe.
    that's not very gentleman like.
    and whether she smokes or not, it is her business, everything about her is her own business.

    please find some peace.
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